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LifeLand: Fire and Ice by Falconstar100

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LifeLand: Fire and Ice

Postby Falconstar100 » Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:16 am

The er... not-so-good cover to Fire and Ice, a little story of mine using CS dogs. Oddly enough, it's a sort-of sequel to another story about CS pets, called Across the Twilight Lands.
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Pheonix
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Aisa as its main characters. Pheonix has never set paw in the LifeLand, being born into a Forsaka Pack who dwell outside the borders, but when his dreams of a tall peak that rises up from the distant mountains become amazingly real, Pheonix sets out on a journey to reach the mysterious Star Dog, Fylo, who has summoned him.
Bored and unhappy with her life in the Snowy Mountains, Aisa's life changes when she stumbles into the Cave of Ancient Crystals, a place of legend, and meets its ancient Gaurdian, Night Eternal, who shows her the path she must take, along with a mysterious prophecy.
Together, Pheonix and Aisa must brave the dangers of the LifeLand and beyond, on a quest that will not only affect their own lives, or that of their Packs, but all dogs, uniting the packs, or shattering them forever.
For Fire and Ice shall burn the sky, and relight the stars...

Drama aside, I hope you like, and PLEASE comment. Feedback would be HUGELY appreciated here. I'm gona post this on Misc in FanFiction!
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Re: LifeLand: Fire and Ice

Postby Bow and Arrow » Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:19 am

It's definitely got potential, I really think it's good! Sounds like an interesting story too!
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Re: LifeLand: Fire and Ice

Postby Falconstar100 » Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:27 am

Thanks ^^
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Re: LifeLand: Fire and Ice

Postby BouncyBall » Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:05 am

Fire and Ice is a warrior book name. DID YOU COPY
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Re: LifeLand: Fire and Ice

Postby Falconstar100 » Sat Jun 12, 2010 3:01 am

BouncyBall wrote:Fire and Ice is a warrior book name. DID YOU COPY

I didn't. I HAVE read Warriors, but I didn't take that title because I saw it and thought it sounded cool. I wasn't even thinking of it when i neamed my story. But it's not a trademarked title. There are loads of stories probably called Fire and Ice, but I called mine that for the reason of my main characters.
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Re: LifeLand: Fire and Ice

Postby BlueCynder » Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:25 am

awesome, i cant wait to read more Falcy xD
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Evening walks among the orchard,

She greets the dancing dusk,

A spirit of the air;

A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.
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