[LauraK]

Imprisoned by strong bars
Chains clank while feet drag in tar
A finger points a way
You wait for the night to sink to day
Constant prinks through your skin
Nausea overfilling, and the stone walls spin
The room fades to grey then black
Crumbling to the floor with a whack
Waking to frigid spikes of ice
And the soft pitter-patt of mice
Peering about, stiff with pain
Have i gone insane?

~LauraK~
Hope y'al like it. and i was wrong, my work didnt brighten up. oh well
Anywho, i would really appreciate commetns and crit, and well yep! ^^
MY ORIGIONAL POERTY, DONT STEAL. thank you!

[LauraK]

bump ^^

[pomegranate juice]

semi colon btw nice poetry

[●Terminator●]

cool just might need to take a bit of the Bl.... away. like ya >.< BUT I GIVE U ALL THIS xd

[LauraK]

semi colon btw nice poetry

Semi colon...? hmm; wll arlighty ^^ thank ya! :3

[LauraK]

cool just might need to take a bit of the Bl.... away. like ya >.< BUT I GIVE U ALL THIS xd

OMG! thank ya! so much enthusiasum thank you so much ^^

[LauraK]

I agree, a lot of your work has been depressing lately. Are you doing okay?

Quite fine, thank you. only a lot on my mind. i find it easier to draw this kind of art anyway... i am debating about if i should or not post another piece of art i drew... hm

[LauraK]

hmm, we'll see...