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Redwind's Story, Part Two by hurricane'sfury

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Redwind's Story, Part Two

Postby hurricane'sfury » Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:21 pm

Redwind gaped with astonishment at Smoke. " N-no. You can't be! My father is dead!" With that, she whirled around and sprinted out of his territory. In her blind rage, she ran into a golden-colored fox. He said, " Well, well, well. Who do we have here?" Redwind glared at him. "Come a paw-step closer and I swear I'll kill you." "A scrap like you? Don't make promises you can't keep." The dog-fox sneered at her. "Okay, then I won't break it." Redwind snarled, stepping forwards lightly on the tips of her paws then flashing her fangs at his throat. At the last second, she swerved her teeth and instead sunk her teeth into his shoulder, then taking them out before the dog-fox could snap at her neck. " Want to play, cub?" The fox growled. He ran headlong at Redwind. She neatly sidestepped and used her unusually sharp fox-claws to tear open his stomach. He collapsed and managed to gasp out," No more! You are a fighter worthy of defeating me, Goldheart! Please let me at least have your name!" " My name is Redwind Bloodfang Scarleaver." Redwind replied curtly. Leaving Goldheart behind her, Redwind fled.
Smoke came panting up beside a gasping Goldheart. "Where did she go?" Smoke demanded. "Th-that way!" Goldheart howled, thrusting his muzzle the direction Redwind ran.
Redwind slowed to a halt behind a full, reeking Dumpster. A broken sewer pipe was slowly dripping water out onto the ground. She bent her to drink. She whimpered for a few moments when the sewer pipe slit her tongue. Redwind suddenly heard Smoke trotting up to the smelly Dumpster. "I know you're here," Smoke called. "It's no use trying to hide from me."Redwind held her breath, trying to make herself as invisible as possible. As soon as she watched him come around the corner, she snarled, " Go away, imposter. My father got separated from me in a fire. I'm sure he died.I saw that there was no escape." "In the fire,Redwind, I wasn't killed.Twolegs came and put out the fire. I ran away as swiftly as I could to escape them." Smoke said. Redwind turned her black back on him and said nothing. "Come on Redwind. Please believe me."Smoke's voice was pained. " Well....I guess I must." she sighed, reluctantly stepping away from the Dumpster and over to him. "There is this...poem, that I used to sing to you when you were a cub. It was...Your prophecy."Smoke said.
" Who can outrun the wind
Yet turn on a single leaf,
Stand silent as a frozen pool
Or steal the breath from a thief?
The Bloodfang!
Who can outswim a pike
Whose eyes are as keen as the hawk's,
Who brings death in her wake
Yet leaves no mark where she walks?
The Bloodfang!
Who can outfight an eagle
And kills with a single blow,
Whose eyes are a blazing emerald
And is only swift, never slow?
Redwind Bloodfang Scarleaver!
DO NOT ANNOY ME, YOU JERKBUBBLE!!!
~Michelle

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