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S o L o n g & G o o d N i g h t by rottenmutt

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S o L o n g & G o o d N i g h t

Postby rottenmutt » Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:59 am

Finally done.;u;
This took me awhile along with the story,i actually really love the way this had come out!c:

The italic is the flashbacks Korkou is having,while the regular writing is him in the present but narrated in a different view.Enjoy,~


Harkou,story of sorrow,and story of war. Innocent victims killed..

S o L o n g & G o o d N i g h t

He sat in the cold dark night,memories burned him like a fire. Engulfing his innocent soul. He had fallen,fallen in love. And now fallen in despair. The painted blue skies huddled above his cold body. Tears fixated in his golden eyes,gold like the autumn leaves.The tears in his eyes had sparkled like the deep blue ocean. A small breeze picked up and blew around his body. His eyes closed as he felt heartache. Memories ad taken over his thoughts,Kiaroke. His mate who had fallen in the war,the war of the century..

I was laying among the borders,staying close to her,ready to protect my beautiful treasure,my beautiful mate.I was ready to put up a fight for her. Her camouflage green pelt had hidden her well in the brush as she was worried of the fight.Her gorgeous bright blue eyes were my bright skies.I knew we couldn't carry on this way,both of us knew. So it was time to flee our packs,and start our own family The outbreak of fights and horror was to much for us both....

The wolf shuddered at the few moments he had to himself. The war had brought him down,killing him inside. He had grown numb since he lost his beauty. He remembered the exact happenings of it. Just the thought made the wolf feel vile and sick. His sandy pelt had shined in the moon light above him.

We had been crawling and wandering for awhile,until we smelled wolves of our packs,the rival packs. They'd kill us if they saw us sneaking off.I scanned the area with my eyes seeing a small abandoned badger den."get in there!"i yelled to her,as she quickly shifted her body inside. Two wolves from my pack approached me as she stayed hidden.I flicked my ears,standing up from my crouch position. I bowed my head at the two,for i was a omega. "good day,sirs."I said in a respectful tone.They stared at me then each other."Omega,who were you talking too?"said my beta. "Nobody sir,"I offered back with a smile and the whip of my tail.I saw the delta wolf sniff around.My ears pinned back."The outsiders were here."he said growling,smelling Kiaroke.I got very weary and nervous.What if he found her!? i thought to myself,i knew then she'd be killed on the spot. She was a weak wolf,she was only a medical wolf in her pack....

He grunted and he looked at his surroundings,he realized this area,this spot.This is where she passed.A victim of war.Defenseless and harmless.

The delta had bared his teeth and snarled."Shes still here,"he said with a smile on his muzzle.He licked his jaws. I had stared at him in fear."no!I don't smell anything!"I said with a smile.The delta and Beta froze and growled."Back down omega.."as they pushed me out of their way I had fallen to my side my head hitting a rock,I soon fainted.When I had woken up I saw them dig up the den she was hiding in. They found her... I thought to myself. She had whimpered and whined as they drug the small wolf out of the den.They threw her to the ground and flicked there tails happily."ahhh..Just as we suspected." the Beta said with a devilish grin on his muzzle,the Delta beside him glaring at me and baring his teeth. I growled as I ran at the two wolves,much bigger and stronger then me. But there was no way i'd let her die on my watch....

He had dug his paws into the dirt,the place where she passed.His ears were pinned to his head. He felt a small breeze blow against him. He felt his warm tears turn cold,and the battle wound on his left side on his ribs be passed over by the chilly wind.He shivered at the feel of the icy wind.

I lunged at the two wolves of my pack.What was I doing!? i thought to myself,that I was crazy.I leaped on my Delta throwing him off his feet.The Beta growled and he grabbed me quickly and snapped his jaws on my neck. He tossed me aside like trash.I shook out my fur and got up once again. I ran at my Beta and I bit his front left paw as he kicked me i the face with his other paw. My nose slowly had started to bleed. I growled."get away from her! Kiaroke,run!"i yelled out as I fought off the two wolves..But it didn't last long.Two high ranked wolves against a omega. Huh,wow what was I thinking.Really.I was tossed aside as I watched Kiaroke in fear.Her legs and body trembled until she quickly got up onto her feet and took off running.The two wolves chased the outsider wolf as she ran as fast as she could,but the Delta jumped onto of her back.Throwing her down on her belly.I stood up quick before they could do damage,but my Beta rushed to me and we fought back with rage and passion."she didn't do anything!"I shouted. But the blood thirsted wolves could care less.The delta held down the Fae and he bit her constantly and kept hitting her around.She was covered in cuts and blood.She laid there in pain. As me and my beta continued the fight he got one last blow in. He shook me down as I fell to my belly in pain.My ribs cage,bruised and a large gash in my flank....

His body started shaking,cold and upset over the flashbacks.They burned a hole in the back of his brain,nothing could get rid of these horrible memories. He just wondered why,why her,why not him.She was the most kind and innocent wolf you would ever meet.

As I watched them hit Kiaroke and keep hurting her,she whimpered and howled in pain.There was nothing I could do.I could not stand to my feet. Soon the two wolves left us for dead,leaving behind a pool of blood and their eerie laughter.I crawled over to her,inch by inch.She was bleeding from many spots.I licked her wounds sadly.I flicked my ears on my skull.She looked at me in pain.She stared me in eyes,her bright blue eyes.She looked away.I began to spoke to her,she turned her eyes towards me.As she couldn't lift her head."Its not about what I want,its about what I need.And what I need is you,I would rather die then leave you.. Nothing will keep us apart,not even the end of the world.." I laid my head on her shoulder as i watched her eyes flutter shut. No last words,as she could barely breathe.But she managed a smile at my words.I had slowly closed my eyes.Night had taken over the dusk. Once morning came I arose from our spot.Seeing her bathed in blood,and not moving.She was gone.Tears filled my eyes like crashing waves.I had howled and had laid with her for days and days,until a rouge had taken me in and saved me. I didn't want to leave her,I couldn't. He dragged me from her lifeless body that depressing dawn...

He had found my tears in his eyes,the wolf bared his teeth in pain. He lost his love in the bitterness of war,a war for no reason. Which could have been resolved,simply. He wish he was granted one last choice,one last wish..He looked up at the stars,shooting stars flickered around the midnight moon, and he flicked his ears up.

"So long,and good night..." The male whispered before looking at the ground in tears,soon padding off into the darkness. Hoping not to see the daylight again.
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Postby rottenmutt » Sun Mar 31, 2013 6:01 pm

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Postby Shadow Panther » Tue Aug 20, 2013 3:13 am

such a sad story....
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