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What Tha Derp by geotalon

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What Tha Derp

Postby geotalon » Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:15 am

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This is like my what.... 3rd oekaki piece? I actually tried on this one, but somehow it ended up ALL messed up... I'm very sorry for the anatomy... I do plan on fixing things, just let me know what to fix ^^' Can I resize a selected part?

This is Enna, my scalesona. She is a dragon/hyena hybrid-like species I created and own. She's chubby, so she is supposed to be round. More of her is in my art thread.
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Re: What Tha Derp

Postby geotalon » Wed Mar 20, 2013 12:17 pm

up ;u; hoping for feedback
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Re: What Tha Derp

Postby RainbowCharizard » Wed Mar 20, 2013 12:18 pm

I like your art, especially the shading!
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Re: What Tha Derp

Postby geotalon » Thu Mar 21, 2013 2:48 am

thanks ;u;
shading is my favorite part
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Re: What Tha Derp

Postby lawfullychaotic » Thu Mar 21, 2013 3:13 am

The shading is very good, the lines are smooth and it fits well, but I think you could have had more work on the BG, and such just maby to emphasize on the character.
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Re: What Tha Derp

Postby geotalon » Thu Mar 21, 2013 4:40 am

Yeah but should I do a simply gradient/shaded background to have the character pop, or do a full scene?
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Re: What Tha Derp

Postby lawfullychaotic » Thu Mar 21, 2013 4:49 am

A sort of sunset or something with a sort of light would look good with the shading, if you add a slight glow.
Personally that's what I think, but it is your choice. Other wise a granite would work with the right colours
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Re: What Tha Derp

Postby geotalon » Thu Mar 21, 2013 10:00 am

I like the sunset idea. Gives me room for little clouds with the sunlight, which is always fun to do.
I have to fix the front paw too, looks so small compared to the others. ;n;
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Re: What Tha Derp

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