Nameless Entry for A U T U M N by waterparks.

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Nameless Entry for A U T U M N

Postby waterparks. » Tue Feb 19, 2013 4:53 am

FInished c: I hope you like her, I'm a failure at tribal print, but I tried DX Please tell me if you want anything added/changed. (<---Don't hesitate to do so!) The bird on her shoulder is an American Robin. Well, anyways, I hope you like it. Tell me what you think!
      "you're a symphony.

      i'm just a sour note."
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Re: Nameless Entry for A U T U M N

Postby | valhalla | » Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:21 am

I really like it. The only criticism is that the back markings don't follow the colour pattern and in makes the composition a bit crowded. All the same, well done :)
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Re: Nameless Entry for A U T U M N

Postby waterparks. » Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:25 am

I kind of thought that it looked odd, too. I'll try to fix it XD
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Re: Nameless Entry for A U T U M N

Postby waterparks. » Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:38 am

Is that any better?
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Re: Nameless Entry for A U T U M N

Postby | valhalla | » Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:25 pm

If I may also suggest, it would be cool if you made the leopard markings the same blue - it would look so cool! Oh an the ears because they look a bit out of place! Hope this helps!
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Re: Nameless Entry for A U T U M N

Postby | valhalla | » Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:25 pm

If I may also suggest, it would be cool if you made the leopard markings the same blue - it would look so cool! Oh an the ears because they look a bit out of place! Hope this helps!
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