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Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby Pachoopi » Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:31 am

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You are taking a stroll along a beach, not making a sound besides the quiet shuffling of your feet against the sand. A cool breeze blows past as you glance out at the misty blue expanse of water. Out of your peripheral vision, you notice something begin to stir, and as you turn to see it, you are shocked at what you see. A large, light blue creature lay as still as the boulders and rocks beside it, staring into your eyes with an unreadable expression. You take a step towards it, and it's gaze intensifies, glowing with warning as if it were telling you to leave, but it still lay silently beside the rocks. You extend your hand out to the creature, and it raises it's head in alarm and stands up. You are shocked to find the creature is the size of a draft horse, as it looked much smaller when it lay beside the boulders. The creature steps toward you, looking at your outstretched hand with curiosity.

Scissors wrote:Ochiru's Name:
    Caetus
Gender:
    Male
Why do you want him?:
    I've always had a soft spot for Great Whites, and when I saw this amazing species, AND this guy up for adoption, right away I fell in love with his design. The thing that got me the most though, was when I found out he based off a Great White Shark.
Story:
    The full moon rose high in the cloudless night, and the waves lapped silently against the soft, white sand. Caetus flexed his paws and felt the sand in-between his toes. Looking up at the sky, he searched for something, he was not sure what exactly, but he knew he needed to find something. Turning back to the large dark cave he was protecting, he couldn't help but feel a sadness deep inside. The being who raised him since he was found in-between the rocks on the beach, took care of him until he was well enough to be on his own, had asked him to watch over this cave for him until he died, but that man died long ago, and he still felt a strong urge to guard this cave. Let it go... He would often hear a voice whisper into his ears, ruffling his mane as it went, He s long gone now, your debt is repaid...It's time to move on.

    The night has long passed, and the noon sun was almost at it's peek. Caetus was hungry, and thirsty, but he hardly ever left the close area of the cave. Normally, prey would just run near enough for him to quickly catch it, or it would rain, and the water would gather in a large leaf, but something was wrong, and there hadn’t been any of those things for days. Now...Now you must let go... With one last look at the cave, he set off in search of food and water.

    Caetus had wandered the beach for 3 days since he left, still being fairly young, he couldn't last as long as most Ochiru would without food or water. He was getting tired, and quickly felt the effects of hunger and exhaustion on his body. He decided to lay down, and take a little rest. His eyes started to glaze over and his world started to go black, the last thing he saw before passing out, was a strange figure in the distance. He woke up, in a place he could tell was far from the cave he was raised in. It smelt of pine, and fresh soil, instead of ocean and jungle. He looked around, and noticed a trail of fish, he had a flash back to when he was young, the old man would catch him fish, and feed them to him in small bits before he could eat them on his own. He got up, and followed the trail, every so often stopping to eat a fish or two, before moving on.

    He emerged from the trees at dusk, there was a cliff side covered in grass, but not tress, rocks or bushes in the way, as he got closer to the edge, he saw a beautiful ocean view, with a sandy beach down below. Looking to his left, he saw the same figure that saved him. "Hello." It was a females voice, soft, but still had a hint of strength behind it. "I don't mean to sound, strange or anything, but you're lucky I found you." She turned her head to him, and looked him in the eyes. He looked at her, nodded, and started to reply "Yes. Thank you." He bowed "And for that, my life is in your hands. I shall follow, and protect you. Serve, and obey you. I will do this until either you no longer need me, or I meet my death."

    From then on, when ever Caetus would look a the moon, he would remember that night he was searching for something in the sky. He would remember the bond him and the old man had, and think of the newer, stronger bond he has now. He will think about how he finally found, what he was looking for.

Thanks to all who entered, and good luck in future adoptions! <3
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby nivans.piers » Mon Feb 18, 2013 7:53 am

Ochiru's Name:
Barueas
Gender:
Male
Why do you want him/her?:
I sorta kinda fell in love with the design when i saw it. It's very unique, and i like the color scheme.^^
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" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
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"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
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" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
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" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
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" If you hadn't been blinded by
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some of those d e a t h s "
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby Vegtaboom » Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:55 pm

Ochiru's Name:
    Caetus
Gender:
    Male
Why do you want him?:
    I've always had a soft spot for Great Whites, and when I saw this amazing species, AND this guy up for adoption, right away I fell in love with his design. The thing that got me the most though, was when I found out he based off a Great White Shark.
Story:
    The full moon rose high in the cloudless night, and the waves lapped silently against the soft, white sand. Caetus flexed his paws and felt the sand in-between his toes. Looking up at the sky, he searched for something, he was not sure what exactly, but he knew he needed to find something. Turning back to the large dark cave he was protecting, he couldn't help but feel a sadness deep inside. The being who raised him since he was found in-between the rocks on the beach, took care of him until he was well enough to be on his own, had asked him to watch over this cave for him until he died, but that man died long ago, and he still felt a strong urge to guard this cave. Let it go... He would often hear a voice whisper into his ears, ruffling his mane as it went, He s long gone now, your debt is repaid...It's time to move on.

    The night has long passed, and the noon sun was almost at it's peek. Caetus was hungry, and thirsty, but he hardly ever left the close area of the cave. Normally, prey would just run near enough for him to quickly catch it, or it would rain, and the water would gather in a large leaf, but something was wrong, and there hadn’t been any of those things for days. Now...Now you must let go... With one last look at the cave, he set off in search of food and water.

    Caetus had wandered the beach for 3 days since he left, still being fairly young, he couldn't last as long as most Ochiru would without food or water. He was getting tired, and quickly felt the effects of hunger and exhaustion on his body. He decided to lay down, and take a little rest. His eyes started to glaze over and his world started to go black, the last thing he saw before passing out, was a strange figure in the distance. He woke up, in a place he could tell was far from the cave he was raised in. It smelt of pine, and fresh soil, instead of ocean and jungle. He looked around, and noticed a trail of fish, he had a flash back to when he was young, the old man would catch him fish, and feed them to him in small bits before he could eat them on his own. He got up, and followed the trail, every so often stopping to eat a fish or two, before moving on.

    He emerged from the trees at dusk, there was a cliff side covered in grass, but not tress, rocks or bushes in the way, as he got closer to the edge, he saw a beautiful ocean view, with a sandy beach down below. Looking to his left, he saw the same figure that saved him. "Hello." It was a females voice, soft, but still had a hint of strength behind it. "I don't mean to sound, strange or anything, but you're lucky I found you." She turned her head to him, and looked him in the eyes. He looked at her, nodded, and started to reply "Yes. Thank you." He bowed "And for that, my life is in your hands. I shall follow, and protect you. Serve, and obey you. I will do this until either you no longer need me, or I meet my death."

    From then on, when ever Caetus would look a the moon, he would remember that night he was searching for something in the sky. He would remember the bond him and the old man had, and think of the newer, stronger bond he has now. He will think about how he finally found, what he was looking for.
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby ⚓ ʜᴀʟᴄyᴏɴ ⚓ » Thu Feb 21, 2013 6:11 am

Ochiru's Name:
Kiba
Gender:
Male
Why do you want him/her?:
To keep me company.
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Here's 3 facts
1. Great White Shark meat is not recommended for human consumption because it has very high mercury levels.
2. The Great White Shark lives for about 25 years.
3. Great White Sharks rarely attack people and when they do, it is because they mistaken the person for their usual seal prey.
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby susie. » Sun Feb 24, 2013 4:49 am

Ochiru's Name
Rapture
Gender
Male
Why do you want him/her?
Because, Ever since I was a little guppy I've loved all kinds of sharks, and when I'd watch scary shark movies I'd always be on the side with the shark XD Because I loved them so much but I was smart and did not look for them every time I went to the ocean XD... Also I really love the design and I've been stalking these since you first started them so I've always wanted one!
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby GrayStar51 » Wed Feb 27, 2013 12:17 pm

Ochiru's Name: Ryder. Rye for Short.
Gender: Male
Why do you want him/her?: I was just browsing through the Created pets when I found him. I took a look at the species, considered taking a whirl at adopting, because I never win these things. I love the colors, my two favorites: Blue & Gray. In case you couldn't tell, I'm a Gray kind of person *points to username*. I was also caught by the stripy mane, which is really wavy, just loved that. I also thought the design was simple enough that I could do it on my own. I hate it when the designs are great when you go to adopt, but then you think about how complicated it will be to make art of your character. And whats the point of having a character if you can't creatively express them, right? I also love the eyes on him. They really pop out from the mellow blues, whites, grays. He just all around looks devious, his fanged smile, the rough mane, the golden eye, the stripes. He is just a "my kind of character". I don't really know how else to explain that. I just really feel connected to this character. i obsessively drew him for 3 hours before I could figure a name. I made one of the few oekakai pictures, I usually just do editables, but I felt he was better than that. I would just love to have him, because I feel so connected to him. And I already have a ton of art on him, so it would be a waste for me not to get him.
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby nivans.piers » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:35 pm

I'm working on my piece of art, but if you would like to see it so far I posted it and you can see the part I have so far.^^
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"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans



" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans



" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans



" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby Pachoopi » Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:27 am

The winner of this Ochiru is Scissors, congrats! The story is very well-written, and the plot is really creative and fits this Ochiru perfectly. C:
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby GrayStar51 » Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:55 am

Congrats, Scissors. It must have taken you forever to have such a good story. Lots of skill and hard work. Your hand must have cramped up for the hours it took to type that.
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Re: Ochiru Adoptable • Great White Shark

Postby Vegtaboom » Sat Mar 02, 2013 10:08 am

It didn't take very long, to type out, but I did think about it for quite some time until the story came to me that I thought would fit this guy :) Thank you so much and I promise to take care of him <33
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