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Nightsky by bananer

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Nightsky

Postby bananer » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:15 am

Well.... A very bad attempt of a moon with clouds and stars. Well, the moon looks like a mold prick on a white cheese and the clouds looks like dustballs.... The stars looks like small lightbulbs.... Well i'm most satisfied with the stars since you can see what they are....
Does anyone have any tips how to make a good realistic moon?
And yes, i've used the dodge tool way too much.... Please, i would like som crit for the picture! :)
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Re: Nightsky

Postby l'Alpaca » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:17 am

I think it is very good-better than I could do!! The moon is slightly unrealistic though.
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Re: Nightsky

Postby bananer » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:18 am

LavenderPidgeon wrote:I think it is very good-better than I could do!! The moon is slightly unrealistic though.



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Re: Nightsky

Postby l'Alpaca » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:18 am

Sorry :(

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Re: Nightsky

Postby bananer » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:32 am

Nono, i said i wanted crit for this picture so it's ok! xD
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I added some more clouds on the picture
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Re: Nightsky

Postby Hajime. » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:40 am

This is exquisite! The moon is so beautiful and the clouds just complete the picture. Very good!
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Re: Nightsky

Postby bananer » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:43 am

Thanks so very much! <3
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Re: Nightsky

Postby bananer » Fri Feb 15, 2013 2:40 am

Another buuump <3
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Re: Nightsky

Postby bananer » Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:28 am

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Re: Nightsky

Postby owls-in-october » Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:44 am

I like the backdrop, but the clouds and moon need fixing. More white/dodge tool for the moon, and try using the smudge tool on the clouds. I have a cloud tutorial, but I think that for clouds at night, just using the airbrush tool in a light, low-opacity shade of gray/purplish is enough.
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