[~Tornado~]

Comparing to my first exempted at drawing a MLP. Yup still has messing coloring... so have I improved? and I would love some tips so I can improve even more

edit:Will fix the lack of black in the corner

[P0CKETKNIFE]

HA HA! The skills have been doubled!
~Suggestions~
-The wings are more blunt, not pointy
-The head needs to be wider horozontally
-The eye should be bigger
-The neck should be longer
-The hind leg isnt connected properly
Other then that you have improved!

[~Tornado~]

Yeah it was a lazy drawing..... I was bugged about all the things you mentioned and the messy coloring especialy the eyes and leg

[Bananaturtle]

I think you totally improved! I do agree about the eye size though.... And I think the ear maybe should be farther down... But I don't know that much about art so...

[~Tornado~]

I think you totally improved! I do agree about the eye size though.... And I think the ear maybe should be farther down... But I don't know that much about art so...

Another mistake that I usealy dont do what I really need to improve on is legs and hooves I tend to make eyes to small and I need to learn how to shade