Redlined by Ourpawprints

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Redlined

Postby Ourpawprints » Sat Jan 05, 2013 2:28 pm

Here is my crit,
-Less erect ears, even dogs with standing up ears they don't perk until they are adults
-Make sure to keep in mind and emphasize the skull structure
-More of a cheek bone
-At that angle there is a less straight and less narrow snout
-Thicker neck
Hope it helps =)
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Re: Redlined

Postby .:Willow:. » Thu Jan 10, 2013 8:00 am

Thank you very much. i did this with a mouse so i have many mistakes on it that i am aware of. (i suck at using mouse) thank you for the crit <3
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