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Pity by Ourpawprints

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Pity

Postby Ourpawprints » Wed Jan 02, 2013 10:55 am

A drawing of my charrie, Ashwin, when he was young. I cannot do curly fur for the life of me. .-. If this isn't intermediate worthy mods, feel free to move.
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

Between school, my pets, homework, art and life I have not been able to get on cs often, so please don't be surprised if I'm not very active.
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Re: Pity

Postby Ash flight. » Wed Jan 02, 2013 11:07 am

Even though it's fantastic, I don't think it's intermediate quite yet. As crit - I'd advise adding highlights in the eyes and thinner lines. Other than that, keep it up!

By the way - the dog in your signature is adorable. <3
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Her dirty paws and furry coat, she ran down the forest slope.

"just like the flowers we sprout, we live in beauty and colour, we grow old, and eventually - we die, but after every seed there's another journey, another life."

The forest of talking trees, they used to sing about the birds and the bees.


"don't cry for those who died, as they have begun another adventure - you may not see them, it may feel empty, but one day the same will come to you - and you'll realise...it's paradise."
The bees had declared a war, the sky wasn't big enough for them all.
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Re: Pity

Postby Ourpawprints » Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:08 pm

Thank you for your feedback.
And thanks, that's my little pug terrier Midnight. =)
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

Between school, my pets, homework, art and life I have not been able to get on cs often, so please don't be surprised if I'm not very active.
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Re: Pity

Postby Bayleaf » Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:15 pm

I agree, this is great, but not Intermediate yet. I suggest you make the shoulder wider and less distinct. ( Did I spell that wrong?) Amazing job though, I like it!
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