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howl with me by ~Kite~

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howl with me

Postby ~Kite~ » Sat Nov 17, 2012 3:16 pm

i was bored, comments and crit loved! :D
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Re: howl with me

Postby The Lost soul » Sat Nov 17, 2012 4:59 pm

comment- edit: now in beginners
Critique(brutal)- the breath wisps are messy and scraggly, and wolves aren't smooth, also, the sillouhettes are misfigured and don't fit a wolf's facial structure and the moon is too round and smooth, the moon is rough and has a haze of light around it. This was moved to beginners.
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Re: howl with me

Postby Mrs. Isaac Lahey » Sun Nov 18, 2012 12:57 am

Well, I like it!! Like The Lost Soul said, it is a bit sloppy, but overall it's great! ^~^
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Re: howl with me

Postby Skycode » Sun Nov 18, 2012 12:59 am

I agree with what The Lost soul said
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Re: sing with me

Postby Bayleaf » Sun Nov 18, 2012 1:58 am

More of a beginner's, sorry bout that. The silloettes (spelled it waaay wrong) are too smooth; it would be more realistic if there was fur coming off the wolves. The moon has craters, and you need to add some craters. Although it is a good drawing, keep that in mind!
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Re: howl with me

Postby erin2019194 » Sun Nov 18, 2012 2:17 am

It's a good drawing, but here's some advice:
Pay more attention to the stars instead of just making them dots
Try and do fur on the sillouettes(I hope I spelled that right)
Make the moon shine(trace around it with transparent white and blur it)
Good job though :thumbup:
I couldn't do that :lol:
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Re: howl with me

Postby ~Kite~ » Mon Nov 19, 2012 12:13 am

omg, im so sorry, i ment to post in beginners anyway, but i saved it as a wip, and was surfing intermediate and decided to finish it, now im trying to figure out how to move to beginners... :)
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Re: howl with me

Postby deftonesly » Mon Nov 19, 2012 12:46 am

Amazing! c: do you mind if i do something like it?
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Re: howl with me

Postby ~Kite~ » Mon Nov 19, 2012 11:25 am

noop! XD
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Re: howl with me

Postby Rebel Faery » Fri Nov 23, 2012 6:30 am

Like it <3 You did a really good job :)
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