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Kyle and Lane by rick.and.shorty

Artist rick.and.shorty [gallery]
Time spent 2 hours, 45 minutes
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Kyle and Lane

Postby rick.and.shorty » Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:44 pm

This is a scene that I drew from a book I'm writing. I love to type and draw :D But I'm only proud of the wolf on the left named Kyle. The rusty one is named Lane.

A gigantic wolf’s head was snarling at me, its fur illuminated, the silver of the wolf glistening like rippling water. It seemed more agitated by my scream and I just barely had time to cover my face before it lunged. It was as big as a stallion; impossible…
I screamed again as pain erupted from the bite in my arm, a pain that was spreading like fire up to my right shoulder and farther as the seconds passed. But that wasn’t what made me scream. A pain like nothing I had ever felt before ripped through my very soul, like as if it was being ripped in half and only part of it had stayed within me. I felt light-headed, the world was spinning and, as I fell, I thought I saw another gigantic wolf with rust coloured eyes filled with golden flecks. The eyes were tearful. The world blacked out, just before I hit the ground…


The rust-coloured eyes with golden flecks are the eyes of a guy she likes but the girl (me, I guess) doesn't know he's a werewolf. Yet... The soul-ripping part also comes into my book later. The black stuff around the wolves are shadows.
I worked my hardest and longest on this pic (though I did NOT try on the background. Backgrounds are my specialty. I don't like the beam of light either but I didn't work too much on it.)
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby rick.and.shorty » Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:55 pm

Oh yeah, not that many sessions I just saved a bunch of times... and the the timer is all-knowing a half hour as I tried to find good refs and tuts for the wolves.
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby rick.and.shorty » Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:05 pm

harsh, no one likes xD lol Ah well. I just have no clue how to get better which bugs me :|
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby Spockylass » Fri Jun 11, 2010 1:57 pm

WAH! That story is such a teaser. Now I want to know what happens next! xD I think this is great! The expressions are marvelous!
Hmm... critique... xP Let's see if I can think of some form of advice. I'm terrible at critiquing.
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I would say that, instead of drawing a large blackness that hides everything for a shadow, use dark grays that you can see through. Shadow over the characters features, so that they appear to be hidden from view, or out of the light. ;) Hope that helps!
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby rick.and.shorty » Fri Jun 11, 2010 2:11 pm

omg xD thanks a bunch and yeah I wasn't sure what to do with the shadows because in my head it was more dark like you see in animated movies and whatever I see in my head never comes out right through my hands.
But thanks so much I was so lost with the shadows... o.o in fact I'll fix it later.
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby rick.and.shorty » Fri Jun 11, 2010 2:40 pm

I don't know if I'll ever completely fix this- I am not yet done, don't worry, it won't stay like this. I'm not too sure how to put what's in my head down on "paper". I get what you mean by putting dark greys so you can see the colours and stuff coming in from behind, but it's getting a little late where I am and I'm just too lazy to do this. I will most likely to it tomorrow.

If you would truly like to know what happens next I can send it to you through a PM.
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby rick.and.shorty » Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:00 pm

Also, Spock, if you want to know what they all really look like here are the links. I did not draw them but I coloured them. If something isn't working, like if I have doubles, please tell me. There are slight descriptions on each page of each werewolf:

Ginni,
viewtopic.php?t=152337

Leila,
viewtopic.php?t=152318

Mack,
viewtopic.php?t=152299

Michelle,
viewtopic.php?t=152257

Terry,
viewtopic.php?t=152177

Kyle,
viewtopic.php?t=152158

Crystal,
viewtopic.php?t=152285

Lane,
viewtopic.php?t=151854

Lane, Leila and Ginni are my favourites. :D
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby Spockylass » Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:16 am

I love Lane! 8D Yes, I would love to see the rest of the story! :)
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby rick.and.shorty » Sat Jun 12, 2010 10:09 am

Okay well I'll PM you bit by bit... whenever I remember so you might have to kick my butt for that a few times...
And always tell me if you don't want to see the rest or whatever. And I'm sorry if it's bad, but judging by how you reacted to those few paragraphs I'm guessing you'll like it haha
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Re: Kyle and Lane

Postby Spockylass » Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:14 am

I'm looking forward to the first bit. =D
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