[wind song]

Congratulations
neonkiwi
As soon as I read it, I could not get the concept out of my head <3
BAH! Your poem writting skills are amazing. And it's a sonnet too n.n
I just loved it to be honest and I love it when things are indirect, metaphorical. Yet Roux still shined through every line.
Well done :'D

▪ Username: neonkiwi
▪ Whelkon Name: Roux (means red, in French)
▪ Poem:
You would not believe how freaking hard it is to write a sonnet. Qualifications to be a sonnet:
-14 lines
-First 8 lines a problem
-Last 6 lines a solution
-Iambic Pentameter
-Rhyme scheme: ababcdcdefefgg
Welp! I managed to do it somehow xD lol
Here's mah poem:
(I have a little stutter-glitch in line 8, sorry xD)

When high time comes to cast the world outside
And step outside our gloomy fate unto
The depths of which thee life cannot reside
We ponder doom that we care not undo
The leaves remind thy self we have adverse
Destinies of which are engraved in sand
Set down like pigeons strapped to the red Earth
And all thy barren slate to be wasteland
Yet still we wake in morning sun and burden
The heavy loads of things we cannot do
Up tall upon our shoulders and sojourn them
And moving on to ponder things we choose
The iron doors reveal unnerving fates
Of that I seal Roux's unconditional fate
~neonkiwi

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▪ Gender: Female
▪ Age: 22
▪ Rarity: Very Rare

[Kite]

▪ Username: neonkiwi
▪ Whelkon Name: Roux (means red, in French)
▪ Poem:
You would not believe how freaking hard it is to write a sonnet. Qualifications to be a sonnet:
-14 lines
-First 8 lines a problem
-Last 6 lines a solution
-Iambic Pentameter
-Rhyme scheme: ababcdcdefefgg
Welp! I managed to do it somehow xD lol
Here's mah poem:
(I have a little stutter-glitch in line 8, sorry xD)

When high time comes to cast the world outside
And step outside our gloomy fate unto
The depths of which thee life cannot reside
We ponder doom that we care not undo
The leaves remind thy self we have adverse
Destinies of which are engraved in sand
Set down like pigeons strapped to the red Earth
And all thy barren slate to be wasteland
Yet still we wake in morning sun and burden
The heavy loads of things we cannot do
Up tall upon our shoulders and sojourn them
And moving on to ponder things we choose
The iron doors reveal unnerving fates
Of that I seal Roux's unconditional fate
~neonkiwi

[biyondo basudei.]

▪ Username: p a s . noir
▪ Whelkon Name: fleur de cerisier, cherry blossom in french. her nickname would be cerisier or ceri <3
▪ Poem: Her muzzle was quiet as she looked through the dark,
her eyes sparkling, her tail laying down behind her.
Her hooves were shuffling very quietly, and she was about ready to spark.
She turned around quickly, hearing the gun shot,
and her hooves scraped against the cold forest floor.
She was running very fast; not ready to be forgot
in all those hopeless dreams that many were lost in.
She took in a deep breath, leaping over a log and quietly,
ever so gently, landing down on the earth again.
She turned back around to stare into the eyes of a silently,
scary creeping hunter, and she lashed back around, running
away. And away.

[Shirlyn]

Little Question. Any poem or about the whelkon? :3

[wind song]

About please n.n

[Kite]

Mine is symbolically about her, is that ok? ^^

It is saying how we can't do so many things, and yet we are still truly beautiful, and have so many talents that we CAN do :3
She is very beautiful x]

[Lolli lillypad]

Can I have one??? They are awesome. I have never figured out how to draw your own picture and then post it. How do you do it? I don't know how.

[m0chicakez]

▪ Username:
Cakeface
▪ Whelkon Name:
Nootau [Native American Algonquin name meaning fire]
▪ Poem:
"She is walking through the forest.
Have you ever seen something like her, to be honest?
Kind and wise like an angel from above
Her colour and personality represents the kind of feeling we call love.
A red forest so warm and cosy is where she lives by her own,
she sighed and walked to the meadow where she lied down.
She is so lonley, without a friend of her kind,
Without someone who understands her mind.
Because her family is gone
What is it our kind have done?
She is the angel of love
And she is a mystery you want to solve.
But that is impossible my dear,
because not every secret will reach your ear.
So give up on figure out what going on,
maybe there is a meaning with this, she started to move on.
So hush now, and see how she into the forest dissapear
Because she is love, and love always have a secret my dear~"
She is so cute :3
It doesn't seem to rhyme very well though, sorry for that ^^

[•αяιƨƨα•]

▪ Ʋƨɛяиαмɛ:
•αяιƨƨα•

▪ Ɯнɛℓκσи иαмɛ:
Raven

▪ Ƥσɛм:

Raven they called her
after the bird
the bird that had followed her
yet neither saying a word

many times they tired
tried to approach
to welcome and accept

but they never could reach her
for she just seemed to move
a step back
as they put forth

she watched and she followed
for days upon end
never stepping closer
then just inside sight

so you knew she was watching
your every which move
the steps you took
and the way you looked

you knew
she knew
because she was watching
as she always would

they never knew
why she always followed
always watched
but never said a word

(oh and the poems two lines over.. hope that's ok I just couldn't seem to find any to drop)

[Starless Eyes]

▪ Username: Sebastian <3
▪ Whelkon Name: vesta
▪ Poem:
Oh how sweet the moons pale ray
Look as it shines upon the bay
Hear how the breezes sigh no more
No billowing against the sounding shore

Say do the eyes of those I love
Behold your beauty as you soar above
Lonely, wise and serene
The calm and humble evenings queen

Say, if on your peaceful breast
The wandering and lonely spirits find their rest
For who could wish for a fairer home
Than in that bright dome

How, I wish to be like you
Resting on a pillow of dark blue
With the stars for my company
And with blankets of pure ebony

But for now, I am a simple mortal
Though I shall still search for a portal
For a way to your perfect face
For a wish not a more peaceful place