To get through this long flashback quicker I drew all the pages out on paper. I think it looks much better on paper! Do you? One thing though: I forgot Leo's ear tag THE WHOLE TIME!! Just pretend it's there, ok ^^
Please PM me if you can't see the images. Note this took me two days to draw and four hours to post, scan, upload... all that good stuff.
Page 22:
one: What?! You expect me to just have lockpicks in my pocket or something?
two: What kind of person just carries that stuff around? Heh heh.
three: ...
four: Girl, you got lucky
five: Erm.. where's the lock on this thing?
six:No lock
Well, gee. Thanks for tellin' me that now.
seven: I LOVE to waste my time when there's a deamon waiting to KILL ME!
eight: CLOMP
nine: CLOMP
ten: GROOOAR!
11: Don't look, Jasper. Just file the bars. Just file the bars
12:shkshkshk
13:WHAT KIND OF METAL IS THIS?!
14:The steel is enchanted
15: GOT ANY OTHER HELPFUL HINTS FOR ME?!!
16: *snort*
17: This is how I die
18:
19: YAAAAAH!!!
Page 23:
1:*snap*
AH!
2:HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO FILE MAGIC BARS...
3:BAM!
Yipe!
4:WITH A GIANT DRAGON THING
5: Deamon
6:TRYIN' TO EAT ME?!
7: NARM!
8: ROAAAR!
9: Ow! My fangs!
10: What a wekling. I didn't even bite him that hard.
11: *brandishes lockpick* Sweeeeet.
12: sniff
13: O.o
14: Grrrr
15:
16:
17: ROAAAAR!
18: Oops. Wrong awnser.
19: *slash* ARR!
20: I think it's time for me to take my leave.
page 24:
1: Eep!
2: *RIIP* Double Eep!
3: AAAAAAaaa
4:OOF!
5: That.Hurt
6: Groan
7:Now you're gonna pay.
8: *nother lockpick*
9:
10:
11:
12: GRIII
13:
14:
15: Whump
16:
17: huh?
18:
19: Jasper, the old man sence the demize of his deamon and is closing the portal to this world.
20: Those who are going to escape perminent captivity must escape now.
Page 25:
1:ok. I get it. *saw saw*
2:shkshk
3:shkshk
4:DONK
5:C'mon, princess. Let's get out while the gettin's good.
6: Thank you, Jasper
7:
8:All right! All right! Let's just get out of here alive.
9:
10:FZZZ
11: KOFF KOFF KOFF! *Fzzz*
12: I geuss you were right, Jasper
KOFF KOFF KOFF! huh?
13: It was a waste of money
14: D:
15: You'll rue this day, biy.
16: You HALFBREED! You will meet another of your kind. He will turn your life upside down and go by the name Leo.
17: POOF
18:
19: The old man is gone!
20: C;mon, Elain. We're leaving this port!
Page26:
1: We found you that day, Kit
Awoo
2: Just struttin' around like you owned the place, silly bird.
3: So now that Leo's here, what am I gonna do, Kit?
4: The last thing I need is more drama.
5:JASPER!
6: Not now, Elain. I'm buisy being depressed.
7: Which is exactly why you shouldn't be alone. *sag*
8: I'm not alone. Kit's in the room.
9: Please, not now. I'm dealing with some stress.
10: By sticking your head out the window?
11: Yeah, so?
12: I like to stick my head out the window. Problem?
13: Jasper, what's wrong?
14: I don't want to talk about it.
15: It's...It's hard to explain.
16: Jasper...
17: Just...Please, leave me.
18: I-I need some time.
19 *slam* I'm sorry.
20: Is he ok?
Page 27:
1: oh, yeah. He yells like that all the time. It's his way of letting off steam.
2:c'mon. I'll show you where you can bed down for the night.
3:
4:
5: Why do I feel like this is my fault?
6: Here. Pick any hammok ya want.
Yeah...thanks.
7: *SLAM* What's a hammok?
8: ok. That must be it.
9: How do you get into it?
10: Grunt grunt
11: OOF!
12: Now I'm afraid to move!
13: zzz
14:Jasper?
Mm?
15: Are you ok? Your ear is out.
16: It is?
17: Mph
18: I'm to tired to care right now.
19: You must be awful tired then.
20: I geuss I'll leave you to rest.
Page 28:
1: ...
2:
3: Elain...
4: Please, stay.
5: I woouldn't want to bother you, captian.
6: *slam*
7:
8:
9:
10:
11:
12:
13:
14:
15:
16: *bing* AW.
17:
18: AWWWWW!
19: AWWWWW!
20: Oh, Kit *whump*
page 29:
1:AWWWW!
YAH!
2: *bam*
3: I am not liking this bird so far.
4: AWWW!
5: *doof*
6: GOT YA THAT TIME, BIRD!!
7: *creak*
8: Yawn
9: *nab*
10: You are the reason I hate mornings.
AW!
11: YAWN
12: Does she do that every morning?
Six o' clock sharp.
13: EVERY morning!
14: If you're luck, you'' get used to it like Elain. Or you could just end up hating it like me.
15: Why can't the pest just let me sleep?
16:
17: C'mon down here. Elain!
18: *BAM* uff
19: Why do you always jump down? You know that makes me nervious.
20: You just awnsered your own question.
Page 30:
1: Can you tighten the ropes on the wheel, Elain?
2: Where're ya goin,?
3: This way.
4: *slam*
5: Where's he going?
6: To try and wake himself up.
7:
8:Really, Leo! You're as bad as Jasper!
9: Sorry!
10:
11: You certainly don't seem sorry.
12: *bonk* Bluh.
13: Still asleep, Jasper?
Pretty much.
14: I think I'm gonnah have to stick my head out anothe rwindow or some thing.
15: OR, HEAVEN FORBID, KIT'D LET ME SLEEP!
16: Oh, quit ranting and go join Leo.
17: Ugh.
18:
19: Swoosh
20: X3
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