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Redline? by Mae;

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Redline?

Postby Mae; » Sun Oct 14, 2012 6:12 am

If someone one could red line this? This is the first time i have ever draw a full body cat and im kinda proud, BUT i want to get better, please people with tablets only, or unless you are AWESOME with a mouse XD I want more than one RL so post away, and if you want to red line on the oekaki i will add you. :]
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Re: Redline?

Postby King of Crows » Sun Oct 14, 2012 6:17 am

I could redline for you :)

One thing is that the anatomy is WAY to canine like. Cats have stocky, parallel bodies and short legs, with very round, soft looking paws. Muzzle is short, very, with a curved slope leading to the nose. Eyes are fowards facing, so should be further forwards from a side view. Tails are typically longer and more fluid, never held down like that when relaxed and standing...

...those are just some tips that I can offer without red lining :)

I'm not good with Oekaki so I'll have to use another program ;)

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Re: Redline?

Postby Mae; » Sun Oct 14, 2012 6:26 am

Yeah, I want to get good at cats since in kinda have Wolfs/dogs and horses down, i didnt use a ref so thats why it kind looks like that. Wow your fast!
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Re: Redline?

Postby Beautifuldayz » Sun Oct 14, 2012 6:27 am

good job on the red line!
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Re: Redline?

Postby Mae; » Sun Oct 14, 2012 7:28 am

Bump!
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Re: Redline?

Postby King of Crows » Sun Oct 14, 2012 7:33 am

Merelaaa wrote:Yeah, I want to get good at cats since in kinda have Wolfs/dogs and horses down, i didnt use a ref so thats why it kind looks like that. Wow your fast!


You're off to a very good start :) I for one only started drawing cats a short time ago...I learned a lot by looking up Cat Tutorials on DA and simply by looking at various pictures of cats. Here are some tutorials I'd recommend reading through:
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Hope those can help! Haha, yeah, I sketch WAAAYYYY fast, it's the coloring that takes me a while :)
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Re: Redline?

Postby Mae; » Sun Oct 14, 2012 9:50 am

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Re: Redline?

Postby spaceguinea » Sun Oct 14, 2012 10:05 am

Tiny-Gryphon wrote:
I could redline for you :)

One thing is that the anatomy is WAY to canine like. Cats have stocky, parallel bodies and short legs, with very round, soft looking paws. Muzzle is short, very, with a curved slope leading to the nose. Eyes are fowards facing, so should be further forwards from a side view. Tails are typically longer and more fluid, never held down like that when relaxed and standing...

...those are just some tips that I can offer without red lining :)

I'm not good with Oekaki so I'll have to use another program ;)

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I think that's really good, but it looks like you made the neck too long :3 Other than that, that's amazing ^^
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Re: Redline?

Postby Mae; » Sun Oct 14, 2012 1:01 pm

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Re: Redline?

Postby King of Crows » Sun Oct 14, 2012 1:32 pm

DŔ♡ѠИƐD~ĪИ~ƬĤƐ~ΛßYSS wrote:I think that's really good, but it looks like you made the neck too long :3 Other than that, that's amazing ^^


Ah, yeah, been drawing dinosaurs and servals too much...used to long necks XD

Merelaaa, do you have any more questions about cats..? I might be able to help out a bit more :) Anything to help a fellow artist <3
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