[Shezmu]

This is Cloudchaser, an OC character of mine based off of art style of MLP. She is Rainbow Dash's rival (although Rainbow Dash only sees it as a contest, she just likes to fly fast, no matter if she wins or not)

I think the timer is preeeetty accurate...that's what you get for forgetting to add another layer e.e

As you can see, she looks pretty discombobulated (wow i can't believe that's actually a word...no red line under it or anything XD), but that's just from flying through clouds at a break-neck speed.

However bad it may look, she is one of my better MLP knock-off characters...

aww man, i forgot to do an outline around her back behind her wing and her neck maybe later.

[Ngagai]

Looks pretty good. If you really wan't to go with the show's style, you could add the triangle shape to the hind legs. She has pretty light and airy feeling with the mane and all. You could try to shade the body too. It looks a bit weird that the goggles are shaded, but not the pony itseld.

But I give you and advice, you could change the name. There is already a pony who fandom named as 'Cloud Chaser'. I mean, there nothing wrong with that name, but just to avoid possible ranting of fandom.

[.Lunarsky.]

:p i can probaly teach you how to Use layers and how to make Manes.
Just message me :3

[Shezmu]

Looks pretty good. If you really wan't to go with the show's style, you could add the triangle shape to the hind legs. She has pretty light and airy feeling with the mane and all. You could try to shade the body too. It looks a bit weird that the goggles are shaded, but not the pony itseld.

But I give you and advice, you could change the name. There is already a pony who fandom named as 'Cloud Chaser'. I mean, there nothing wrong with that name, but just to avoid possible ranting of fandom.

oh, thanks for the heads up...umm let's just call her...Cloud...something....okay, her name is TBD, i can't think of anything good XD
oh, and last minute i was thinking of shading the goggles because they looked really weird just brown...i'll fix up the shading right now

EDIT: fixed shading...if you could call it fixed...