[.Missy.]

Sorry guys, this one is for me owo. But I'll make more of this contrasting colored ones so if you want one, just adopt one CX

[Darien]

i like it, although, next time you do extra fur, make sure you clean it up a bit in the transition. there needs to be less of a boundary between the preexisting fur and the added fur. just thin the lines in between, like i've done in the mane

[.Missy.]

Im sorry *cowards back in fear* I'll do it correctly next time… :C

[Darien]

did you want to fix this one? make it a little better ^^
things you could do to improve:
put the shading layer back on
add shading to the added fur
make the background white
rename the oekaki "Deer Lion #5"

or if you would like i could fix it

[.Missy.]

I can tell your hinting that you don't like my art. I can quit if you don't like it. Just ask. Because I won't edit it if I like it.

[Darien]

I can tell your hinting that you don't like my art. I can quit if you don't like it. Just ask. Because I won't edit it if I like it.

i do like your designs, i just need them all to have the same basic format. it is simply professional.

[.Missy.]

Mhmh, sure. Well, I like to be different <3 It makes me… me

[Darien]

i understand, however, there are certain guidelines, and they need to be followed

[.Missy.]

Well, This is my custom, the only one different. lets not change it.

[Darien]

ok...could you make the background white though?