[welcome to carnival.]

This pic is so kitschy..... x)
I'll also do another one with birds...
Comments and Critism appreciated!

[geinkotsu]

Wow I really love the colors! Definitely a very inspirational and more joyous peice. The only thing I'd point out is extremities. Sometimes you have to go with extreme measures of motion or volume in peices just to ink out their true potentials. I see you are playing with wind here- well go crazy with it! Experiment with throwing hair everywhich direction and pulling cloths about and whipping them around in the wind. You truely dont know how far you must go until you've gone too far~

[welcome to carnival.]

I really love the way how you express yourself, just wanted to say <3
I'm a rather careful person... it could also be a light breeze........ No, i know you're right (the petals wouldn't fly that high and twirl that much if it was a light breeze... =P) I think i should write down all the things i should pay attention to next time
Dankeschön!! [German] <3

[geinkotsu]

Hah, I am very expressive when it comes to art, especially when talking about it. ^^' And I do understand what you mean, I can also be very cautious and worried about tidiness of a drawing. And very unsure about darker values. Sometimes it's good to just ignore it all and go insane with something xD

And psh, you dont need to write anything down. Just study and keep in mind details and you'll eventually just have all of it filed in your mind and you dont even have to think about it to apply it in practice.