[Host]

eh, i tried.

Neck needs to go in more, maybe a ltitle more fuz...?

Eye needs to be slightly bigger

Fluff at the jaw line

Rounded ear points.

Don't define everything with lines. Shading helps a lot, like on the ears. Instead of adding that one line, just add shading, and it will show the dip in the ear.

The nose.. Well, it needs to be a little shorter coming down and more defined.