[welcome to carnival.]

Strong as you were, Tender you go
I'm watching you breathing for the last time
A song for your heart, but when it is quiet
I know what it means
and I'll carry you home

Carry you home - James Blunt

[geinkotsu]

FFFF full bodies are difficult. And on Oekaki too- you are crazy. The only thing that would nag me is the character being held, is a tad rigid. Mostly in the and possibly legs. If you think about it, spins are curved, as well as, if you were hanging between (lets say) two bars, your but would sag from gravity, especially if you were unconscious. I see your intents of gravity in the arm, hair, and the one leg, which is a great start. But gravity loves to grab at everything, sometimes you really have to sit back and consider little aspects of drawings like gravity or motion or force strain and values and light sources.

[welcome to carnival.]

You're right, my mum mentioned that as well but i was too lazy to edit x)
I will one day
And Thank you!!!! :33

[geinkotsu]

Ffff, trust me I rarely edit my things when I say im done and post it. But the critisism can always be applied and remembered for future peices, aye?

[welcome to carnival.]

yeah, right
[Thank you!! xD =P]