[El.]

This is a sketch I made. I'm only recently experimenting with the oekaki, so I am not incredible.

I would like it if someone could give my pointers and/or critique please!

EDIT: I have edited my picture. The eyes look better and better spaced apart. The face is less fat.. But still I think the lips are to large and the nose may be a bit crooked..

~B r e a t h e

[Mys]

Lol welcome to oekaki. Here are some tips. If I'm not correct, someone let me know. To space the eyes better, you can draw a third eye that's as big as the one you drew and place it in between the two eyes. If there's just enough room to fit a third eye, they're far enough apart. If there's still room for a bit more, you might want to move the eyes closer. The nostrils of the nose should line up with the eyes tearducts. The corners of the mouth are also aligned at the eyes tearduct. The ears start a little above your eye and ends (I think) at your nose. You can find all kinds of tutorials for hair. Knowing where the hair parts can be important. Don't be afraid to draw eyelids and eyebrows. In general, look around for videos on how to draw humans and try drawing them. You'll get better. Hopefully I gave some good advice. XD Oh! And if you want to really get serious with digital drawing, I'd suggest buying a graphics tablet.

[El.]

Thanks! This was helpful, I will try c;