- I don't want this to sound too harsh, but for a start..
• The muzzle needs to be a little thinner, and less "round" looking under the nose.
• The nose needs to be a little bigger - not too much, but enough to not look squashed.
• The neck would need to be a little thinner, unless the animal has pretty long fur, then I suppose it's okay on some levels.
• I think the ears would also need to be slightly smaller, and less sharp-looking at the ends
• Don't forget the light bit of cheek fur, otherwise it sometimes looks like it doesn't have bone/muscle/etc. in that area!
• The eye needs to be more "triangular" looking, a little like this;





