Redline by nmrn

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Redline

Postby nmrn » Fri Sep 28, 2012 10:12 am

    I don't want this to sound too harsh, but for a start..

    • The muzzle needs to be a little thinner, and less "round" looking under the nose.
    • The nose needs to be a little bigger - not too much, but enough to not look squashed.
    • The neck would need to be a little thinner, unless the animal has pretty long fur, then I suppose it's okay on some levels.
    • I think the ears would also need to be slightly smaller, and less sharp-looking at the ends
    • Don't forget the light bit of cheek fur, otherwise it sometimes looks like it doesn't have bone/muscle/etc. in that area!
    • The eye needs to be more "triangular" looking, a little like this;
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Re: Redline

Postby Kiare » Fri Sep 28, 2012 4:06 pm

Thank you for your critic I've been looking for some more 'strong critic' lately <3
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