[Chasing Dreams]

This guy has some scars, to win, write a short story about how he got them.
(If you can't see he has scar's across his eye)

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Ends the 30th 12:00pm EST

Username:
~LotusMoon~

Kelpie Name:
Achilles

Kelpie age:
7 years

Gender:
male

Story:
Achilles walked around underneath the silver moon that gleamed against his dark coat his eyes matching the color of the stars that brightly glimmered in the sky. He had been walking for awhile now, his ears gently twitching from side to side as he listened to his surroundings. His vision was impaired by the darkness and the trees that made the swamp seem more dense than the usual nighttime shadows. He stopped almost instantly as he heard a twig snap behind him, his head rising and his ears perking up as his tail swished from side to side. "Who's out there?" The stallion called out with his spine-chilling voice wondering if maybe another stallion was looking to challenge him. He heard a small growl from behind bushes which made him curious since it was unlike a cougar's but more deep and intimidating. He stomped the ground letting the creature know he wasn't afraid of what was about to jump out onto Achilles' flank. The creature broke skin on his flanks, making him grunt in pain as he tried kicking up his heels to make the monster release his now bleeding flesh. The animal was cat-like but larger than a cougar coming up to the lower part of his stomach the head to his shoulder. Achille's ears had gone flat against his head ready to put up a fight with the big cat, snorting as the cat hissed and pawed toward his muzzle. He flew his head back dodging the animal's sharp claws from catching his face, but the second time the cat had clawed his left eye. He neighed out in pain but reared up to scare the creature away from him, coming down hard on the ground almost smashing the cat's front paws. It fled from where the stallion was into a lighter part of the swamp, its colors were flaming orange with black stripes. He shook his body feeling the blood run down his leg from the wound, he wondered how a tiger could have escaped the zoo walls without being caught. Achille's walked back to a cave where he had felt more safe in, laying down as he fell asleep exhausted from the attack he had just encountered.

[OceanBlast]

Username:

OceanBlast

Kelpie Name:

Sample

Kelpie age:

13

Gender:

Male

Story:

His legs were stiff, his eyes were drowsy, and his mane was tangled. He had been chased for miles through a dense, and narrow canyon. By a lion, a mountain lion. Maybe it couldn't roar, but it could certainly jump. Wip~

Large Wip~

Ignore my bad story, my brain's a little tired X3

[Boaz]

Username:
~LotusMoon~

Kelpie Name:
Achilles

Kelpie age:
7 years

Gender:
male

Story:
Achilles walked around underneath the silver moon that gleamed against his dark coat his eyes matching the color of the stars that brightly glimmered in the sky. He had been walking for awhile now, his ears gently twitching from side to side as he listened to his surroundings. His vision was impaired by the darkness and the trees that made the swamp seem more dense than the usual nighttime shadows. He stopped almost instantly as he heard a twig snap behind him, his head rising and his ears perking up as his tail swished from side to side. "Who's out there?" The stallion called out with his spine-chilling voice wondering if maybe another stallion was looking to challenge him. He heard a small growl from behind bushes which made him curious since it was unlike a cougar's but more deep and intimidating. He stomped the ground letting the creature know he wasn't afraid of what was about to jump out onto Achilles' flank. The creature broke skin on his flanks, making him grunt in pain as he tried kicking up his heels to make the monster release his now bleeding flesh. The animal was cat-like but larger than a cougar coming up to the lower part of his stomach the head to his shoulder. Achille's ears had gone flat against his head ready to put up a fight with the big cat, snorting as the cat hissed and pawed toward his muzzle. He flew his head back dodging the animal's sharp claws from catching his face, but the second time the cat had clawed his left eye. He neighed out in pain but reared up to scare the creature away from him, coming down hard on the ground almost smashing the cat's front paws. It fled from where the stallion was into a lighter part of the swamp, its colors were flaming orange with black stripes. He shook his body feeling the blood run down his leg from the wound, he wondered how a tiger could have escaped the zoo walls without being caught. Achille's walked back to a cave where he had felt more safe in, laying down as he fell asleep exhausted from the attack he had just encountered.

[Shiko Hayashi]

Username: Shiko Hayashi
Kelpie Name: Soldier
Kelpie age: 12
Gender: Male
Story: I hope you don't mind me writing his story in poem format Chase.

In the meadow
A young foal pranced
His heart alight and his soul aflame
He yearned for adventure
For battle for love

So on his mission to quell his flame
He set from home
In the stroke of night
With clear eyes
And an eager heart
He followed the drums
That beat through the land
Bu-bu-bu-bum

Only three years later
he stood in a meadow
His pelt coated with blood
His hooves coated with gore
His once glistening eyes
Now dampened with sorrow

Scars of time
Crisscrossed his life
Breaking his soul
And marking his sides

For before him stood
A memory of time
Long gone, and forgotten
For he had once yearned for battle
For love and war
But now his heart
Yearned only for rest
Yet still the drums beaat on
bu-bu-bu-bum

[Copper96]

Username: copper96
Kelpie Name: Ezekiel's Avenger
Kelpie age: 6
Gender: male
Story: Zeke trekked through the marshes of his home land, He loved this land and its gifts. Gifts and secrets he had to protect no matter the situation. As he Walked along, following the signs of mother nature and the overall destiny of all. He Sighed he knew they were there and that humans, a very few knew of his species out in the bayou. Lifting his hoofs higher he avoided a match of mud that his long mane and tail hung precariously in. As he stepped aside his front hoof slipped and he stumbled to an awkward stand in front of a mucked pond. He caught himself and stopped looking at his reflection in the water. Seeing his disformed shape looking back. Lowering his muzzle to the water he sipped below the surface, the cool water quenching the growing thirst in his throat. It happened so fast though. Scales rose from the water and a jaws grazed his eye as they snapped shut. Blood now running down his face and blocking his vision he stumbled back, only to have his hind legs slip and the beast once again rake his claws across his hindquarters. Infuriated, he turned Jaws wide. His little canines ready for his revenge on the creature that had dared to attack him. Lashing out with his hooves first and then charging in with his antlers lowered, He scrapped the scaled beast. Turning then to sink his sharp canines into whatever he could grab with his mouth. Hearing a satisfied crunch after he had pierced past the scales. He let go, the beast now scrabbling into the water, its wounds extensive and surely more than that than Zeke had gotten out of the fight with. Proudly he stood taller, Pawing the ground with his hoof in warning. His mane, tail, and fur were now caked with mud, and he grumbled quietly about it as he mad his way on, blinking his eyes and shaking to loosen up. The now drying blood on the scratches across his eye and rump. He trekked on disappearing into the mist

[SpartanAmethyst]

Username:
SpartanAmethyst

Kelpie Name:
Commander

Kelpie age:
9 years

Gender:
Male

Story:





WIP <3

[Chasing Dreams]

Username:
~LotusMoon~

Kelpie Name:
Achilles

Kelpie age:
7 years

Gender:
male

Story:
Achilles walked around underneath the silver moon that gleamed against his dark coat his eyes matching the color of the stars that brightly glimmered in the sky. He had been walking for awhile now, his ears gently twitching from side to side as he listened to his surroundings. His vision was impaired by the darkness and the trees that made the swamp seem more dense than the usual nighttime shadows. He stopped almost instantly as he heard a twig snap behind him, his head rising and his ears perking up as his tail swished from side to side. "Who's out there?" The stallion called out with his spine-chilling voice wondering if maybe another stallion was looking to challenge him. He heard a small growl from behind bushes which made him curious since it was unlike a cougar's but more deep and intimidating. He stomped the ground letting the creature know he wasn't afraid of what was about to jump out onto Achilles' flank. The creature broke skin on his flanks, making him grunt in pain as he tried kicking up his heels to make the monster release his now bleeding flesh. The animal was cat-like but larger than a cougar coming up to the lower part of his stomach the head to his shoulder. Achille's ears had gone flat against his head ready to put up a fight with the big cat, snorting as the cat hissed and pawed toward his muzzle. He flew his head back dodging the animal's sharp claws from catching his face, but the second time the cat had clawed his left eye. He neighed out in pain but reared up to scare the creature away from him, coming down hard on the ground almost smashing the cat's front paws. It fled from where the stallion was into a lighter part of the swamp, its colors were flaming orange with black stripes. He shook his body feeling the blood run down his leg from the wound, he wondered how a tiger could have escaped the zoo walls without being caught. Achille's walked back to a cave where he had felt more safe in, laying down as he fell asleep exhausted from the attack he had just encountered.

Winner! I love the story and name :D

[Boaz]

Thank you! This is my first stallion and he is extremely handsome