[welcome to carnival.]

Based on this song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lYvg6cTOi9E <33

Well this is my second attempt (i deleted the first cuz it looked terrible) to draw relaistic stuff and i'm quite happy how especially the hummingbird turned out. I had no idea for the background though, so if anyone else has, please tell It's still a sorta WIP

Refs:
Hummingbird: http://amsdaily.net/wp-content/uploads/ ... ngbird.jpg
Eye: http://ergonomenon.com/wp-content/uploa ... strain.jpg
Flower: http://www.alaska-in-pictures.com/data/ ... y_7094.jpg

Wonderful (c) Gary Go
Art (c) Me

And as always comments and critism are APPRECIATED !!!

[geinkotsu]

Oh wow- I love that humming bird! Especially the flecks of colors~ I also really love the color in the eye, and the fact the white of the eye isn't white (so many people get that wrong, even me occasionally when i forget).

Only thing I would point out for the eye, is that the iris where the lightspot is, is actually darker in color because of how our lense bends light. Also, you know where you apply eyeliner on your bottom lid? Well, its usually pretty visible without eyeliner (im not sure if you filled it with black here or not), so the lashes don't connect so close to the eye.

Hah, I appear to love giving you constructive critisism~

[welcome to carnival.]

You're right with the lashes, i'll edit that
And thank you!