[archeron.]

Ok, this was a total fail....It was supposed to be my horse Holly's eye, but I don't know. It's terrible.

Critique and Comments wanted! PLEASE help me!

This is my first Oekaki ever, so please be fair! I have only done color ins and now I wanted to try this.

[rax]

This is really good for your first oekaki c:
To make it look more like a horse eye, you could not put so much white around it, and make it less almondy; more round. Hope that helps!

[archeron.]

Thanks!

Yeah that helps. I tried to get it to look right off of this picture, but I don't think it looks the same....

[war paint.]

[I can edit it ^^]

[archeron.]

uh, sure...I added you as an artist.

[war paint.]

viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1372287

[archeron.]

Is that her fetlcok? Oh, and that white stuff is her stripe.

[war paint.]

Yes c:3 lemme edit.

[archeron.]

I think if you had some lines to show where the strands are, it would look awesome.

[war paint.]

-sigh.- okay XD