[Flowerdust]

This is my first male and I decided to make him look tough and warrior like. He is blind in his left eye. I want you to write a story that isn`t over 5 pargraphs long about how he was blinded. It also must have 3 paragraphs.

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Name:
Gender: Male
Short Story:

[Aravel]

I looked at him and I was like 'Huh? Since when did horses have pink other than on their nose?" Then I realized they were scars. xD Beautiful stallion!

[Flowerdust]

Lol you crack me up Maggs! Thanks

[Flowerdust]

BUMP

[Aravel]

People will see him Dusteh. Lol c:

[Britasuarus.]

Name: Jack
Gender: Male
Short Story:
[From his point of veiw]
As I raced across the field, I knew it was over. There were two men after me in a jeep with large shotguns and ropes. How was I supposed to survive against them? I kept running, speeding with all my strength and then feeling myself slow down, getting more and more worn down. I knew that's just what they wanted. I am doomed, I thought.
Then I saw it, my way out. I raced towards a forest on the far side of the field struggling to make my long legs move any faster. I finally reached the darkness and cover of the tightly packed trees and I finally slowed myself to slow down. "I made it." I laughed to myself and gave a wild buck. "I MADE IT!" I screamed and did a extremely ridiculous dance of pure joy at being alive. Then the world changed.
A heard the snap of a twing above me and looked up curiously. I saw my worst fear... mountain lion. Before I could move the nasty cat came crashing down on me with full force, knocking me to the ground. I whinnied in pain and distress and kicked with all my might. Finally I knocked the lion off and kicked its head, hard. The mountain lion laid still. I tried to move and made it to a river, and collapsed in a bloody, sweaty mess.
When I woke I managed to drink from the river and when my ears stopped ringing, I stood up slowly. I then made the mistake of looking at myself. I realized with a shock I was blind in one eye. I sighed and realized I was scarred for life. I walked away from the river and looked for somewhere to go.

[Flowerdust]

Name: Jack
Gender: Male
Short Story:
[From his point of veiw]
As I raced across the field, I knew it was over. There were two men after me in a jeep with large shotguns and ropes. How was I supposed to survive against them? I kept running, speeding with all my strength and then feeling myself slow down, getting more and more worn down. I knew that's just what they wanted. I am doomed, I thought.
Then I saw it, my way out. I raced towards a forest on the far side of the field struggling to make my long legs move any faster. I finally reached the darkness and cover of the tightly packed trees and I finally slowed myself to slow down. "I made it." I laughed to myself and gave a wild buck. "I MADE IT!" I screamed and did a extremely ridiculous dance of pure joy at being alive. Then the world changed.
A heard the snap of a twing above me and looked up curiously. I saw my worst fear... mountain lion. Before I could move the nasty cat came crashing down on me with full force, knocking me to the ground. I whinnied in pain and distress and kicked with all my might. Finally I knocked the lion off and kicked its head, hard. The mountain lion laid still. I tried to move and made it to a river, and collapsed in a bloody, sweaty mess.
When I woke I managed to drink from the river and when my ears stopped ringing, I stood up slowly. I then made the mistake of looking at myself. I realized with a shock I was blind in one eye. I sighed and realized I was scarred for life. I walked away from the river and looked for somewhere to go.

Congrats I loved your story and I think you will take care of Jack..

[Britasuarus.]

Thanks so much!! Yay!!

[Flowerdust]

It looks like you`ll love him

[Britasuarus.]

Yep! Are we allowed to use this speices for personal characters??