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wolf by Leaf.

Artist Leaf. [gallery]
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wolf

Postby Leaf. » Sun Aug 26, 2012 2:03 pm

Funny looking wolf
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WE FOUGHT TO RULE THE WORLD
NOT KNOWING JUST HOW FRAGILE WE REALLY WERE
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Re: wolf

Postby lex » Sun Aug 26, 2012 2:11 pm

Alright, let me give you some crit:
»First off, the nose shouldn't be that low. It should be pointed toward where the wolf's head is pointing, not down.
»The eyes should be bigger, and more centered.
»The muzzle is too skinny. You should make it a little thinner and that might help.
»The ears could be bigger. It might help to make them bigger, but so far you have the right concept.
»The head is a little to big to match the other parts.
»Finally, you have a good concept on fur, but perhaps make it a little more sharp, not where it look's like human's teeth.

»»However, I do see you making very talented art in near future. Keep trying! Practice and patience is the ky to art!
just kidding im back a little
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