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Name:FoxFeather
Kittypet name: Foxx
Ex-mate:Arbour
Mate:Eaglecall
Clan:Seaclan
Kits:Thrushkit,Herrakit
History: When FoxFeather was born,she lived in a force-breeding and cat-fight habitat. The humans tried to forcebreed FoxFeather with many toms but she refused unless it was her love,Arbour. She never fought-luckily. But one day when FoxFeather's ex asked her to be his mate,she gladly accepted. That day,they found out she had kits and the two lovers escaped. The owners took guns to chase the cats back by shooting near them-but the outcome wasn't good. They shot Arbour and killed him. Devastated, FoxFeather went on alone or months. About her three month of pregnancy-she found a tree to stay in before leaving the outskirts of Seaclan territory. A copper tabby tom watched her and helped her as she had contractions and was in the tree. An apprentice helped too. But as time passed- FoxFeather and the tabby, who's tag was Eaglecall, developed crushes on one another. At first-Eaglecall thought that it was just hormones. But no-it wasn't as others thought of him as cold,aloof and awkward,Fox and her kits helped him-he soon like FoxFeather back.

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It's a very nice story, but one pointer is that cats gestation/pregnancy is only 3 months, not 9 months, you might want to change that, lol. Those would be some humongous kittens if they had 9 months gestation.

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Haha. Thank you.

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You're also missing 2 signatures, one on the body and one on the head. Please replace them with the edit feature.

Thanks.

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Okay. ^^