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Unicorn! by catplushie

Artist catplushie [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 15 minutes
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Unicorn!

Postby catplushie » Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:10 am

I really like this one :D
I think its one of my best oekakis. What do you think? Critique is always welcome :3
Should I make it an editable?
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Re: Unicorn!

Postby Ourpawprints » Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:27 am

This is really good. I really like it. The only crit I'd give is maybe the back is a little bit too flat and I think some shading would add some dimension.
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"You shout it out,
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I'm talking loud not saying much
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You shoot me down, but I get up

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Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
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You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
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Re: Unicorn!

Postby Crocigator » Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:31 am

Very nice! My only suggestion is to make its torso a bit shorter. You can do this by using the 'select' tool (dotted-lined box) and drag it over one half of the horse. Then copy and paste it (ctrl+c, ctrl+v) and use the moving tool (plus sign with arrows) and drag it, making the torso shorter. Then go back to the other layer and erase the half that you just moved, and merge the two layers (ctrl+e). This is just a suggestion...it looks really great right now!
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Re: Unicorn!

Postby catplushie » Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:03 pm

I fixed it :3
Does it look better?
Thanks for the nice comments, btw
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Re: Unicorn!

Postby Crocigator » Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:04 pm

Yes...nice job!
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Re: Unicorn!

Postby catplushie » Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:07 pm

Thank you :D
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