":/" is what I thought when I first saw the lines that TheHorseWhisperer said they needed help on. I didn't do much to the lineart, just a couple anatomy fixes and such. This is what made me this that: ITS AWESOME. It is!! You should keep it pretty similar, I just thought the rear curved out a bit too much on the adults and the foal's body was a bit too long, but that's about it. So, I didn't even add my sig, they're so good all I had to do was a few edits!! So, added you Whisperer, and you asked if I wanted to be an artist, if you still say I can be then my answer is- "YESSSHHH!!!!!! *flails around in explosion of stuff" xD I think that even if you wanted super realistic lines, this would be 'cuter' in a sense and attract more customers, so you should stick with the few edits I made and that's really it, unless you choose someone else :3 Thanks!! 
