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Springing Deer by peachie.

Artist peachie. [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 34 minutes
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Springing Deer

Postby peachie. » Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:39 am

    This is my first time ever drawing a deer .... not sure if I did it well or not ...
    anyways comments and crit is always welcome.
    I was going to post this in intermediate but I posted it in beginners just to be safe.

    Springing Deer (C) amour.
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Re: Springing Deer

Postby NightxPine » Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:43 am

This is pretty good for your first attempt at drawing a deer! :D
Tips: I think that the hind legs are a bit too curvy at the end (if I make sense :P ) and also I think that it would look better if the muzzle didn't have a black line down the side :)

Hope I helped :)
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Re: Springing Deer

Postby peachie. » Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:47 am

NightxPine wrote:This is pretty good for your first attempt at drawing a deer! :D
Tips: I think that the hind legs are a bit too curvy at the end (if I make sense :P ) and also I think that it would look better if the muzzle didn't have a black line down the side :)

Hope I helped :)

    Thanks! I too noticed that the back legs looks a little wierd too. I've seen the line down the side of the muzzle on some of the pictures I've seen ^^
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Re: Springing Deer

Postby NightxPine » Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:37 am

amour. wrote:
    Thanks! I too noticed that the back legs looks a little wierd too. I've seen the line down the side of the muzzle on some of the pictures I've seen ^^


Yeah. For the muzzle, maybe you can use the smooth tool to make look better? :)
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