My red line by mochii_

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My red line

Postby mochii_ » Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:32 am

Hey! I'm here to help you. ;)

1.The ears are too big and bulky. Make them smaller and more into proportion to the dog’s size and breed.
2.Dog’s muzzles are not like that. They can’t smile anyways. Try making it more realistic like mine.
3.A dog’s eyes cannot move like that. They can close their eyes but it’s more like a almost straight line.
4. The neck is too think and small. There is no chest! Try to make a neck that comes out from the cheeks down and make a small bump into the chest.
5.A dog’s legs aren’t like that. They cannot be like that unless the dog’s hind legs are behind them. Try to make it more like you are really looking at a dog like that.
6.A dog’s paws have more details to them. I can’t draw perfect paws but try your best to add them to your drawing.
7.A dog’s waist is fuller right behind the front legs then get a little smaller near the hind legs.
8.A dog’s tail isn’t that fat. Try to make it smaller if it’s a smooth coated dog and fluffier if it’s a long hair.
9.The hind legs are more like my picture.
10. Same as #6.
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