It's rough, but.. Yeah..
The head is not supposed to be circular. Give it plenty of curve, especially on the jaw and the forehead.
The mouth curves in, not strait.
Try smoothing your lines. Just bump up the smoothing bar
Erase lines beneath the bangs/ hair.
Nose lines shouldn't be as sharp. Again, fix with smoothing bar.
I can't draw ears, but they do come down just a little
Hope it helped!
