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Pheonix Wolf by Pluto_Kuroshitsuji

Artist Pluto_Kuroshitsuji [gallery]
Time spent 37 minutes
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Pheonix Wolf

Postby Pluto_Kuroshitsuji » Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:43 am

This is my very first intermediate post... I'm still not sure if I'm ready or not but I am looking for criticism and I am confident that I am experienced enough. Please tell me what you think. Mods if you sincerely do not think I am ready yet you may of course move. :roll:
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Re: Pheonix Wolf

Postby Spaceeboyyy » Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:49 am

It is so pretty! I think it was worth a shot, but it is not quite intermediate. (almost though!)
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Re: Pheonix Wolf

Postby Pluto_Kuroshitsuji » Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:25 am

Well I guess it is intermediate because the mods haven't moved it yet :/ Thanks for the comment though I do agree with you... :roll:
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Re: Pheonix Wolf

Postby .vixen » Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:00 am

For Criticism- I would try using the airbrush on a small scale and make small flames on the body that resemble flames. For the ground, I like the separation but, I might have made the flames a bit bigger on a different layer and then take down the Opacity overlapping the strokes will give you that live 3D look and will appear that they are moving.

For Commentary- I like the fawning of the wings and tail, the background is very well done but may need a little bit more blending. The separation of the flames that are on the ground it very well portrayed. Over all, a very nice piece. Remember that the mods might still move this, it just takes time. Just be prepared and don't feel bad :]
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Re: Pheonix Wolf

Postby Pluto_Kuroshitsuji » Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:24 am

Thanks! I will go post in the beginners now to give the mods less trouble :3
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Re: Pheonix Wolf

Postby Pluto_Kuroshitsuji » Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:40 am

It's fine that they moved it I totally agree with them I need some work.
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