[mochii_]

1. Too much of a point, let your lines flow. It is too slanted, make it more smooth.
2.Muzzle is too fat. Make it thinner and set the lower jaw a little behind the top muzzle. Like the picture I drew below.
3. Ears are very good accept they are alittle too round. Add more of a point.
4. Fur lines are too choppy, make them smoother.
5. Neck fur is way too wide! Make it a smaller opening next time!

Thanks! I hope you find this helpful!