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Tears by BlueCynder

Artist BlueCynder [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 6 minutes
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Tears

Postby BlueCynder » Tue Mar 09, 2010 6:56 am

comments? crit? names for this crying purple wolf? (i messed up the front legs DX, i'll probabaly edit later)

i edited it....mhm i think it looks worse.....i changed the tear thing and the eye...looks really crap. thats the problem with me. When i change something, it gets worse not better :roll:
Last edited by BlueCynder on Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Evening walks among the orchard,

She greets the dancing dusk,

A spirit of the air;

A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.
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Re: Tears

Postby Alpha Wolf » Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:08 am

I like it, but t could be better, just keep trying I have trouble with the computer drawing to!
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Re: Tears

Postby BlueCynder » Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:48 am

i know, im so crap DX. I go and look at Intermeiate and think how do people get so good?!! so im gonna practise and practise, mabye practise some more and try out different styles and stuff, i want to get really good. That will probably never happen but im gonna try! Im ok at drawing with pencil, i wish i had a tablet. It would be so much easier!!! mabye. thanks for commenting!
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She greets the dancing dusk,

A spirit of the air;

A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.
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Re: Tears

Postby Spockylass » Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:00 am

I think it's lovely! :) Perhaps make the eye smaller and more detailed? The face is a very important part to a drawing, it's where most people look first!
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Re: Tears

Postby BlueCynder » Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:05 am

thanks XD i usually do that, i just want to try something different. but i'll change it. :mrgreen:
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She greets the dancing dusk,

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A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

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The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.
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Re: Tears

Postby Epischlol » Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:07 am

I think the face looks nice. Big eyes are really cute, too! But that makes drawings a tad less realistic. It depends on how you want your drawing to look!
I can see you messed up one if the front legs... But you already noticed that... It's a good thing that you can easily fix things like that!
Other than that, I think it's awesome! I'm saure soon enough you'll be ready for intermediate! Unlike me. My drawings stink.
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Re: Tears

Postby BlueCynder » Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:14 am

itermediate?? me?? no way. Im not that good
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The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.
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Re: Tears

Postby Balan » Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:50 am

It's Epic! I love how you did it. And you said you did it with a mouse?
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Re: Tears

Postby Spockylass » Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:09 am

I think the new eye looks splendid! It really draws your attention, and you seem to have patched up the leg nicely! :) It looks MUCH better!
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Re: Tears

Postby BlueCynder » Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:54 am

thanks! yeah, i drew it with a mouse DX horrible mouse. lol. you think it looks better? yaaay!
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