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Postby corpsewallet » Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:06 pm

(from the left) Raven, Apollo, and IronFang.
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Postby Ebonpyre » Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:11 pm

Very nicely done. The anatomy could use a little tweaking, but otherwise it looks great.

If you don't mind a little critique...

The head on the left is nicely shaped- the hair and some other bits of the fur need a tince bit of editing to me, and I'm not fond of the eye shape.

The one on the right, though, looks too 'square'. You should make the muzzle narrower, with a bigger definition of where the forehead ends. Other than that, and what I said with the first head, it looks great.

The middle head, however, looks a bit sloppy in general. It looks to be added in at the last minute, and sticks out from the rest in an unpleasant manner. Maybe if you used thinner lines?

There's a few places where you colored outside the lines, but overall it looks good ^_^ With just a little bit of practice you should be seeing a lot of improvement. Can't wait to see your work as you progress.


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Postby corpsewallet » Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:28 pm

Happy now?! :evil:
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Postby Ebonpyre » Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:31 pm

Hey, chill! I meant no offense, just offering some advice. You don't /have/ to do what I say, it wass just a helpful suggestion. Everyone's entitled to their own opinions


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Postby corpsewallet » Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:35 pm

*raises eyebrow* Oh really? :evil:
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Postby ~Helix~ » Wed Mar 03, 2010 3:17 pm

Ya rly.

o3o I think it looks nice, don't worry, critiques and commentary really do help. Azora was not being offensive in the least, she spoke her opinion and offered good advice. Quite frankly, you show a lot of promise. Keep up the good work. :3
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Postby dasniu » Wed Mar 03, 2010 3:32 pm

Ya, rly.

I think crits REALLY help. Though, I havent had any, because no one comments on meh work.

Azora wasnt trying to be rude, or offensive
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Postby SelkiesSong » Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:37 pm

Yup yup.

Think of it this way--If you get a really good critique like that, it means the person thinks you have the potential to put it to use. :) It's essentially a compliment.
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Postby SilverHund » Wed Mar 03, 2010 11:54 pm

Where's Apollo?
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Postby SilverHund » Wed Mar 03, 2010 11:56 pm

AZORA! Quit being nasty! That was at my request and no one really cares how the eyes look! The anatomy better than mine! :evil: APOLOGIZE!
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