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Foxes by Fantasy Inc.

Artist Fantasy Inc. [gallery]
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Foxes

Postby Fantasy Inc. » Thu May 10, 2012 3:50 am

two foxes in the forest. crits please? (jeah i know the shading isn't good)

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Re: Foxes

Postby strawbewwy. » Thu May 10, 2012 4:36 am

I know I am a pretty sucky artist here, but, I do a lot with shading and I might be able to help with that! :) the fox with the most light on it, use the "burn" tool around it to get the feel of a shadow. The fox thats standing, its head is slightly to big for its body. on the tree, try not to make it look like a beaver chewed threw it part way and decided to leave it, try to make it straighter, but if you must, make the tree slighty tilted or curvy, instead of chewed :) on the grass, try to make it more like grass instead of a flat green ground, try to add some texture if you can :)

I hope that helped and wasn't to much critique for you!
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Re: Foxes

Postby W o l f ;; » Thu May 10, 2012 5:05 am

hereth wrote:I know I am a pretty sucky artist here, but, I do a lot with shading and I might be able to help with that! :) the fox with the most light on it, use the "burn" tool around it to get the feel of a shadow. The fox thats standing, its head is slightly to big for its body. on the tree, try not to make it look like a beaver chewed threw it part way and decided to leave it, try to make it straighter, but if you must, make the tree slighty tilted or curvy, instead of chewed :) on the grass, try to make it more like grass instead of a flat green ground, try to add some texture if you can :)

I hope that helped and wasn't to much critique for you!

Here is some crit from me. Do not use burn tool! You could use water colour in a darker shade than the base colour or you could use the airbrush/spray in a darker shade than the base colour.
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I am a wolf,
running through the trees.
Following the scents
on the midnight breeze.
I am a wolf,
standing with my beautiful mate.
We must stand strong and ]brave
and face any callenges sent by fate.
I am a wolf,
hunting with my pack.
With the young and old wolves waiting
for meat to be brought back.
I am a wolf,
wild, fierce and free.
Living in forests and mountains
s t r e t c h i n g as far as the eye can see.
I am a wolf,
I'd never want to be anything more.
And I hope that even after I'm gone,
there will be wolves forevermore.

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Re: Foxes

Postby W o l f ;; » Thu May 10, 2012 5:16 am

Also it could help using layers and smoothing

How to do smoothing
1.In a brush box, select the "Round Soft" type of brush.
2.Make "Smoothing" from 30-40% in brush box.
3.Draw lines. If you want more smoothness, you can eventually go to "Effects">"Blur">"Box Blur" and put "1" in the first box.

How to use layers:
There is a box, with lock alpha and a layer box that says layer 1 on it, so that is the layer box. So now you know what the layer box it, all you do now it click the + button twice. Next you double click the one at the top and name it "Lines" then the one under Neath "Colour" Then the one at the bottom called layer 1 "Back Ground" or "BG". After you have done that you start drawing the lines, and when you finished the line art, you then start colouring and you click "Colour", and when you finished the picture you add the back ground by click "BG" or "Back Ground", then you star colouring. Now you are done!
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I am a wolf,
running through the trees.
Following the scents
on the midnight breeze.
I am a wolf,
standing with my beautiful mate.
We must stand strong and ]brave
and face any callenges sent by fate.
I am a wolf,
hunting with my pack.
With the young and old wolves waiting
for meat to be brought back.
I am a wolf,
wild, fierce and free.
Living in forests and mountains
s t r e t c h i n g as far as the eye can see.
I am a wolf,
I'd never want to be anything more.
And I hope that even after I'm gone,
there will be wolves forevermore.

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Re: Foxes

Postby Fantasy Inc. » Thu May 10, 2012 7:37 am

thanks for the help!

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