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.:One Move:. by *QUIT*

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.:One Move:.

Postby *QUIT* » Thu May 10, 2012 10:39 am

"One single move can make a difference in your life. It's your desicion if it will be a good one or a bad one."
~Quote I just made up~

Just a little realism test. I would really appreciate some constructive critism on this piece. I have no idea what to do with it at this point ^^" But I did notice that it has either a very long neck or a very ungroomed shoulder.... Now I should go get back to commissions....
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Re: .:One Move:.

Postby Tsuru » Thu May 10, 2012 10:52 am

I think that's AWESOME. And nice quote ;)

Maybe you could add a ridge of fur so that it looks like they're facing away from the viewport (XD blanking out there) and turning their head to the side, in profile. (or is that what you were doing already? If so, sorry I didn't look closely enough.) Or you could just draw the shoulder fur looking groomed. :D
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Re: .:One Move:.

Postby *QUIT* » Thu May 10, 2012 11:05 am

thank you ^^

I was originaaly wanting it just to be a sideview of a cat. But now I think I'd like it better if the back were to be facign the viewer and the head is simply turned. I think I'll just smoothen out the fur a bit at the bottom. Probably. I'm not sure if I'll touch this up. :p
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Re: .:One Move:.

Postby Ourpawprints » Thu May 10, 2012 1:51 pm

I love the texture on the fur. It is amazing. The only bit of criticism I have is the ears look really tall but not wide enough.
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
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Between school, my pets, homework, art and life I have not been able to get on cs often, so please don't be surprised if I'm not very active.
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Re: .:One Move:.

Postby *QUIT* » Fri May 11, 2012 3:49 pm

Thank you! I'll try to do that next time. ^^ cats aren't my specialty :P


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