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Squirrel in the sun by Ourpawprints

Artist Ourpawprints [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 21 minutes
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Squirrel in the sun

Postby Ourpawprints » Wed May 09, 2012 8:38 am

I've never posted in intermediate before due to fear of being flamed even though I've always wanted more crit then beginners offers. I don't know if this is good enough for intermediate, all the other drawings in intermediate look so much more realistic then this but I tried. Mods, feel free to move to beginners if needed.
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The timer is a lie, it took an hour. I'm probably going to make a whole new background, this one is awful. The ears creep me out. I don't really consider it finished yet, I'm probably going to just keep playing with it or just give up and start from scratch. Comments and crit welcomed and appreciated.
Last edited by Ourpawprints on Thu May 10, 2012 10:39 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Squirrel in the sun

Postby CaveBear » Wed May 09, 2012 9:43 am

The squirrel looks great, the picture will look even better if you add trees and stuff to the background :)
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Re: Squirrel in the sun

Postby McKellsen » Wed May 09, 2012 10:01 am

I am sorry but this isn't really intermediate. Maybe if you fixed the shading and the lines a little and added more to the background.
Keep up the great work and just keep practicing! ;3
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Re: Squirrel in the sun

Postby Crocigator » Wed May 09, 2012 10:04 am

Looks good so far. I agree with lfsen that you should probably add more shading to the squirrel. Keep trying!
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Re: Squirrel in the sun

Postby Chupa-Cabra » Fri May 11, 2012 9:21 am

Looks good, the fur texture is great <3
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Re: Squirrel in the sun

Postby Ourpawprints » Mon May 21, 2012 1:41 pm

bump


Last bumped by Ourpawprints on Mon May 21, 2012 1:41 pm.
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