[thesaltybobcat]

GIVE ME YOUR HONEST OPINION!!!

[33Kitty]

Hmm... my honest opinion...
The canine is much better than what I can do, but what is on it's back?
I think it would look more sophisticated if the shadows were deeper and the "dark" was closer to black. Also, because your style involves a definite outline, I'd suggest hard cell shading rather than what you have now.
Tons of potential here!

[thesaltybobcat]

Hmm... my honest opinion...
The canine is much better than what I can do, but what is on it's back?
I think it would look more sophisticated if the shadows were deeper and the "dark" was closer to black. Also, because your style involves a definite outline, I'd suggest hard cell shading rather than what you have now.
Tons of potential here!

yea thanks! the things on his back is his spine he is supposed to be REALLY thin =3 anyway thanks! i will keep all that in mined

[not.human.at.all.]

This looks really good. C:
There are a few things that could use correction, and it just seems to be really what 33Kitty wrote. The back is a little strange; I know you're going for a starved look, but I would lay off on all the spinal bumps where his neck is and start them near the beginning of his lower back (Did you understand that? I'm terrible a writing).
Other then that, awesome. I really like your style of art.

[33Kitty]

You're welcome! I hope that wasn't worded harshly... if it were, please don't take it that way! I was just a bit annoyed with one of my OCs when I wrote this. damn blind characters they make everything so ridiculously hard! how on earth am i supposed to use imagery if she can't see?