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Penguin :P by ofmice&piercedsirens

Artist ofmice&piercedsirens [gallery]
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Penguin :P

Postby ofmice&piercedsirens » Sun May 06, 2012 12:45 am

im not great at drawing but im looking for a bit of creative criticism?? hope you like it!!
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Re: Penguin :P

Postby sergeant serket » Sun May 06, 2012 1:29 am

I don't really have any crit for you, but I think you should try practicing a bit more. You're really good, but you should practice a bit on layers. c:
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Re: Penguin :P

Postby Girl on Fire » Sun May 06, 2012 2:22 am

This is cute!
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Re: Penguin :P

Postby Guest » Sun May 06, 2012 2:35 pm

I don't think this is intermediate, sorry.

I would try a different method of shading. Just doing airbrush shading looks fuzzy and too soft. I would suggest ding it in pencil then lowering the layer opacity. C:
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Re: Penguin :P

Postby darlingdiablo » Sun May 06, 2012 2:37 pm

I wuffles It- I wuffles Penguins, but I agree- I don't think you're just ready for Intermediate

For criticism? I prefer the term... Ideas. I think for the Penguins outline, maybe don't go so thick
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