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In the cold by silverfire

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In the cold

Postby silverfire » Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:45 am

This is my first picture in intermediate. I wanted to see if i was good enough to post in it! I guess the picture is of a greyhound or something like that, in cold weather. Hope you like it! Comments and criticism would be appreciated! :) the background is pretty simple, but i've never been really good at them :D
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Re: In the cold

Postby profilegone » Sat Apr 21, 2012 11:47 am

Oh my gosh. I haven't seen you post in Oekaki forever! Even though you probably don't remember me. o3o

But nice picture. :3
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Re: In the cold

Postby arcticwolf » Sat Apr 21, 2012 11:54 am

The background isn't bad, it's pleasant to look at, though there's not much there. It's plain.

Not to be harsh but I'd suggest working on anatomy before posting in intermediate.
Take this as a reference of the body of a sitting greyhound:
http://image.shutterstock.com/display_p ... 424195.jpg
Image not mine, I take no credit.

Greyhounds have unusual body structure, but try to keep it realistic. Greyhounds and other long, tall, skinny breeds are hard to draw imo, though you may differ.

Good luck. Again, don't take this as an insult. It's merely constructive criticism.
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Re: In the cold

Postby silverfire » Sun Apr 22, 2012 12:25 pm

Thanks!

And thanks for the crit, i was drawing a wolf but its face ended up looking more like a greyhound to me, so....yeah XD :D
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