[T-O-X-I-C]

at night
you will have a fight
this night is going to be your last breath
because its going to be your death.

At night star my wolf turns into something horrible. when the moon is red (some one makes it red like a power of somthing) She turns into her nasty form (this s not her form her form is coming soon) and kills anythink in her way.

[Ngagai]

I don't really think this is intermediate worthy. Maybe you should add shadings and other stuff? Also the anatomy is wrong, but I am not that experienced in wolves that i would help to fix it. Just keep drawing, and you will notice when it is worthy to intermediate.