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Well, first of all, sorry if the second panel burns your eyes. I got really lazy with the coloring and lines there. ...Aaand I seriously didn't feel like shading here. xD Secondly, it's sunrise, not sunset, just to clarify. And yes, there will be some action within the next few pages. ;D

Dialogue

Panel Two
Ashkii: So cold. So tired. I hate patrolling.
Fala: Oh, suck it up.

Panel three
Fala: Your friend has to get up early and do this everyday.

Cover

Chapter One[cover]

[Artwork-Is-Key]

I love this so far.

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:3

Oh crud, I forgot the marking under Fala's eyes. o3o Fixed. x3

[vav.]

looks good so far

[XxClawStarxX]

Yay! Can't wait to see my character!!!!

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:3 Next page is coming out soon. Pages will probably come out quicker when some real action starts. *o* I have the sketch for the next page, but I have an extra panel and I'm totally lost about what to do with it. xD I think it's too small to fit anything good into but I don't want to just erase the line and make it part of the last panel either. Bl

[sarafina;]

Lol, I'm a bit late. XD Hehe
Can't wait to see the next parts!

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I actually think I'm going to remake this comic since I'm not very far and I have new characters I want to use.

[StarryDust]

Not bad. I like where you start. Just something, not full-out action. :3

[breadstick]

I love it!