[alfy1998]

I want some criticism , please

[Hikari-chan]

Well if I find something to criticise, I'll let you know.

I think it's great. I love the colors you picked too.
Did you use a tablet or a mouse?

[WolfsAbyss]

omg why is this in begginers!? It's amazing, I have no criticism just want to tell you it's great.

[Ryuu]

I like the colours and shading :3 I think the eye could improve if you clean up the outline, making it smoother or blending it in more and erasing the extra lines outside the eye, and adding a little highlight in the eye? But again I like the lines of colour, it makes it pop especially with the dark background, and makes it more 3D and realistic

[alfy1998]

No , I used the mouse