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Postby alfy1998 » Sat Feb 13, 2010 7:53 am

I want some criticism
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Postby Cedarstar » Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:02 am

SMOKING IS HORRIBLE :(
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Postby hagmegsis » Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:08 am

i agree smoking is bad but if you get past the fact thats its bad for you the image its self is great the smoke is wispy like a real cigarette and then you put a background that doesnt over clash the effect of the cigeratte so over all great job i just done suggest smoking them
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Postby The Sky's The Limit » Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:29 am

It's really good...but why a cigarette?!??!
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Postby єναи » Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:34 am

Abster wrote:It's really good...but why a cigarette?!??!

It's probably pop art. Pop art is art that has what people wouldn't draw, like a toothbrush.

Anyways, this picture should be at Intermediate Oekaki.
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Postby alfy1998 » Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:43 am

I know agree is horrible , I just like to draw fog , but I had no ideas what draw, so I draw a cigarette :D
Oh and, I never tried to smoke , I and i will never try! Smoking is horrible!
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Postby Sykhe » Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:57 am

Not trying to be a prick, but I do not think cigs are very child appropriate. x__x

Anyhow. I s'pose the image itself is fine disregarding.
In comparison to the table the cig is a little hard, and it's a tad too shiny. Otherwise it looks fine to me.
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Postby ???Who?? » Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:19 am

thats really good
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Postby poison ivy » Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:31 am

it's looks awesome
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