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Bird attempt by Ashbreeze

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Bird attempt

by Ashbreeze » Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:44 am

Any constructive criticism?

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Re: Bird attempt

by Alaska. » Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:19 am

Could I redline? I'm not good at constructive criticism.

Livestream-off!

I can't see past my own nose,
I'm seeing everything in slo-mo
Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
A train from the sky, locomotive, my motives are insane
My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play

While you're doing fine, there's some people and I

Who have a really tough time getting through this life

So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.

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