[sydney bee]

On Chinese new year thousand's a lit into the night sky.

But only 5 appear on a foggy night...


This is my first ever drawing, so Im still getting used to it,

any praise (Prob not) or critisism (Prob alot) is appreciated, cuz I want to get better.

Thanks!

[fungusmonsterlover]

way better than my first drawing on here...

[sydney bee]

Ha, bet not.

[Vrazda]

Cool oekaki, SydneeXxX.
I really like the fact that you used multiple shades of blue in the sky... a lot of people forget the varying shades in nature. =)
As for critique, I might suggest that you use harder lines? When I started the oekaki I also did everything with the airbrush... 'tis very natural to be afraid of harder features.
You could lay a base with the pencil tool and use the pen/pencil tools to add fine lines for detail. Then you could use the airbrush at the very end to add the necessary glow. =3
Just a friendly suggestion of course, you don't have to take it if you don't want to. You've already got off to a great start on the oekaki. ^^

[sydney bee]

Thnx, i really appreciate the advice, it can really help with my new drawings thnx!!